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Approved Starship Sith Starfighter

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Darth Vyrassu

Immortal Jen'ari Sith Emperor

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

* Intent: Personal Starfighter for the Jen'ari Imperial Navy

* Image Source: Source Here

* Canon Link: MK VI Supremacy Class Sith Fighter

* Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
* Manufacturer: Sith Imperial Foundry

* Affiliation:Order of the Jen'ari

* Model: MK VI Supremacy Class Sith Fighter

* Production: Mass-Produced.

* Material: Durasteel
* Glasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
* Classification: Starfighter

* Length: 12.5 meters

* Width: 2.6 meters

* Height: 7.5 meters

* Armament: low
* 4 Laser cannons (2 on wingtips and 2 in chin)

* Defenses: low

* Squadron Count: 1

* Maneuverability Rating: Extreme.

* Speed Rating: Extreme

* Hyperdrive Class: 0.3

STANDARD FEATURES
All standard features of the MK VI Supremacy Class Sith Fighter

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
N/A

Strengths:
+ Extremely fast and agile

Weaknesses:
-Low Defence and low armaments

Description: The Sith Starfighter originally designed in the time of the old republic with the Resurgant Sith Empire. But eventually the style of the Starfighter died out. Vyrassu reconstructing Vitiate's Empire brought the design back and put it into production. Although it has low defenses and low armaments, it's made to quickly overwhelm any enemies in a hurry also making them very difficult to shoot down due to their extreme speed and maneuverability.
 
[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

So this is very overpowered with the extreme ratings at mass production, you can get away with this at unique. To avoid a possible report, I would suggest lowering production or adjusting the ratings!
 
[member="Darth Vyrassu"], this looks a bit overpowered in terms of ratings (it's about 4 ratings too high right now. I'd really recommend lowering its flight performance somewhat. As reminder, when thinking about balance, the starship template has solid guidelines:


For technical statistics start with all values at Average for a Mass-Produced vessel. For every increase either:
  • Reduce the Production Value
  • Reduce another statistic (e.g. increase speed, decrease defensive rating)
  • Provide balance with genuine weaknesses
 

Darth Vyrassu

Immortal Jen'ari Sith Emperor
This is a cannon item, and I don't see how it's not balanced, it's only defence is it's fast, no shields no defensive weapons, poor offence, with oily 4 small lasers [member="Gir Quee"]
 
[member="Darth Vyrassu"], this being canon doesn't necessarily mean that we can overlook basic balance. As an extreme example, the Death Star and other super weapons are canon too, but they're not allowed on the board.

I can approve this as is, of course, but it's very likely to be reported and then subsequently denied. I'd recommend looking at the template examples to get a feel for typical ratings. Here's a few of them:

Fighter
Examples: X-wing
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:
  • Image Source:
  • Canon Link:
  • Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer:
  • Affiliation:
  • Model:
  • Production: Mass-Produced.
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Starfighter
  • Length: 12.5 meters
  • Width: 4 meters
  • Height: 3 meters
  • Armament: Average
    4 Laser Cannons
  • 2 Proton Torpedo Launchers (4 torpedoes each)

[*]Defenses: Average
[*]Squadron Count: Average: 12
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Average
[*]Speed Rating: Average
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons, Proton Torpedo Launchers
  • Standard Targeting Systems
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description:

Bomber
Examples: Tie Bomber
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:
  • Image Source:
  • Canon Link:
  • Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer:
  • Affiliation:
  • Model:
  • Production: Mass-Produced.
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Starfighter
  • Length: 12.5 meters
  • Width: 4 meters
  • Height: 3 meters
  • Armament: Moderate
    2 Laser Cannons
  • 2 Proton Torpedo Launchers (4 Proton Torpedoes each)
  • 2 Proton Bomb Launchers (2 Proton Bombs each)

[*]Defenses: Moderate
[*]Squadron Count: Average: 12
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Low
[*]Speed Rating: Low
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons, Proton Torpedo Launchers, Proton Bombs
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description:

Heavy Bomber
Examples: TL-118 StarHammer

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:
  • Image Source:
  • Canon Link:
  • Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer:
  • Affiliation:
  • Model:
  • Production: Limited.
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Starfighter
  • Length: 35 meters
  • Width: 22 meters
  • Height: 10 meters
  • Armament: Extreme
    2 Heavy Laser Cannons
  • 1 Twin Laser Cannon
  • 2 Light Laser Cannons
  • 1 Concussion Missile Launcher (4 missiles)
  • 1 Proton Bomb Bay (9 Proton Bombs)

[*]Defenses: High
[*]Squadron Count: Very Low: 4
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Low
[*]Speed Rating: Low
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons, Concussion Missile Launcher, Proton Bombs
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description:

Interceptor
Examples: A-wing
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:
  • Image Source:
  • Canon Link:
  • Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer:
  • Affiliation:
  • Model:
  • Production: Mass-Produced.
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Interceptor
  • Length: 9.6 meters
  • Width: 6.5 meters
  • Height: 3 meters
  • Armament: Low
    2 Laser Cannons
  • 2 Concussion Missile Launchers (4 Concussion Missiles each)

[*]Defenses: Low
[*]Squadron Count: Moderate: 16
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Average
[*]Speed Rating: Moderate
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons, Concussion Missile Launcher
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description:

Droid Fighter
Examples: Vulture Droid
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:
  • Image Source:
  • Canon Link:
  • Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer:
  • Affiliation:
  • Model:
  • Production: Mass-Produced.
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Droid Starfighter
  • Length: 6.25 meters
  • Width: 4 meters
  • Height: 3 meters
  • Armament: Low
    4 Light Blaster Cannons
  • 2 Energy Torpedo Launchers

[*]Defenses: Very Low
[*]Squadron Count: Very High: 24
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Average
[*]Speed Rating: Average
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Droid Brain
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Light Blaster Cannons
  • Standard Targeting Systems
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description:

Gunship
Examples: Skipray Blastboat
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:
  • Image Source:
  • Canon Link:
  • Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer:
  • Affiliation:
  • Model:
  • Production: Mass-Produced.
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Gunship
  • Length: 12.5 meters
  • Width: 4 meters
  • Height: 3 meters 5
  • Armament: Very High
    2 Heavy Ion Cannons
  • 1 Twin Laser Cannon Turret
  • 3 Proton Torpedo Launchers (4 torpedoes each)

[*]Defenses: High
[*]Squadron Count: Low: 8
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
[*]Speed Rating: Very Low
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons, Heavy Ion Cannons, Proton Torpedo Launchers
  • Standard Targeting Systems
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
-Additional "Omni-Vu" Sensor Pylons

Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description:

Elite Fighter
Examples: Tie Defender
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:
  • Image Source:
  • Canon Link:
  • Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer:
  • Affiliation:
  • Model:
  • Production: Limited
  • Material: Durasteel hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Elite Starfighter
  • Length: 6.5 meters
  • Width: 18.75 meters
  • Height: 3 meters
  • Armament: Moderate
    4 Laser Cannons
  • 2 Laser Cannons
  • 2 Concussion Missile Launchers (4 missiles each)

[*]Defenses: Average
[*]Squadron Count: Low: 8
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Moderate
[*]Speed Rating: Moderate
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Array
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Hyperdrive
  • Standard Ion Engines
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Repulsorlift Engines
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Starfighter Weapons: Laser Cannons, Ion Cannons, Concussion Missile Launchers
  • Standard Targeting Systems
  • Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Wing-mounted maneuvering jets (Allow Tie Defender to execute complex maneuvers)

Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description:
 
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