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Approved Lore Silence of Maldra IV

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GENERAL INFO

Media Name: Silence of Maldra IV

Format: Holonet news article

Distribution: Common

Length: Between 1 and 5 pages

Description: "Silence of Maldra IV" was a news article circulated around the galaxy around 850ABY. The article reported on the sudden, inexplicable silence of the planet Maldra IV and the economic effects on the neighboring worlds. The article also elaborated on the possible connection of Maldra IV's sudden silence with the demise of surrounding worlds such as Kesh and Lowick, although most was speculation.


SOCIAL INFO

Author: Independent journalists

Publisher: various news outlets across the Galaxy

Reception: The description of Maldra IV's peculiar fate of immediate silence without prior warnings of distress raised only questions and gave no answers. This bit of viral news began to build on a pattern in the Outer Rim of worlds falling quickly and without word. Those familiar with the news before it was inevitably drowned out received it with much speculation and a growing confusion.


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CONTENT INFO
Excerpt from a more notable article reporting Maldra IV's sudden silence:

"The Outer Rim world known in more recent years for their interest in geoengineering technology has inexplicably fallen silent. This follows a small number of other worlds in the surrounding territories sharing a similar fate. Kesh and Lowick have been topic of concern in the past year. Both world's seemed to fall prey to a mysterious menace that had left them completely uninhabitable with some isolated reports from their surfaces making claims of monster armies. What is most peculiar about Maldra IV is it's complete lack of prior or further communication. It seems the entire system has been snuffed from the stars without a word".


HISTORICAL INFO
For some, to face the Bryn'adul is a fate worse than death. Paralyzed by fear of the scourge of the Outer Rim, the inhabitants of Maldra IV used their geoengineering technology not to shape their world but to end it. As a stark image of Galactic weakness, the Bryn'adul chose to leave Maldra IV relatively undisturbed. The billions of frozen bodies untouched like an art piece that screams dread and fear into the void.
 
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Zak Dymo

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I'll be doing this review for you. Unfortunately, this appears to be an incomplete submission, as you are missing two required sections from the template. Those being Content Information and Historical Information. As per the rules: The entire template must be used in your submission. The template's base fields are not to be changed/removed/altered with the exception of a Force Nexus.

You may also choose to include an Events section, but that part of the template is optional and is not required.

Another note: The title of this thread is "The Silence of Maldra IV" but within the submission it states

Media Name: Silence of Kesh

However, the remaining text of the submission refers again to Maldra IV. Which planet is this submission referring to? Is the reference to Kesh an error? or is it relevant to the submission in some way?

If you would like this moved to Pre-Codex while you work on those sections, please let me know. Otherwise, please tag me when you have completed your edits.
 
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