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Approved Location Sibris Station

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: Sibris Station
  • Classification: droid factory/droid testing area
  • Location: Alabash
  • Affiliation: The New Techno Union
  • Accessibility: Only accessible by N.T.U. personnel. Access is gained through hand print and retinal scans. This is accomplished by attempting to enter at a ground level door built into the duraglass dome connected to a series of landing pads by a metal walkway.
  • Security: The factory supports a steady 500 B9 battle droids and 5 R.C.A.Ps at all times, however any droids waiting to get shipped out can be used for security. There is also cameras in every room and hallway linked to a central security hub.
  • Description: What appears to by a tiny city is in fact actually a small hab center for scientists, engineers, and droids waiting to get shipped out. Under the city is a large network of factories built into the ground and run by massive thermal generators sapping the energy from the magma from the volcanic planet of Alabash

POINTS OF INTEREST

"City": The "City" or complex of large buildings on the surface surrounded by a sphere of duraglass houses the laboratories, engineers, and scientists who tirelessly work on new technologies or repair old ones for the N.T.U., and droids waiting to get shipped out.

"Factory": The factory, or factories, are massive under ground networks of conveyor belts, automated assembly lines, and testing facilities outfitted with state of the art tech.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Dresden knew he needed to expand, specifically with more factories due to his only place of operation being on Coruscant. He contacted Dr. Upari, one of his closer business associates who offered him a place on Alabash, and who was Dresden to refuse such an easy offer, especially after the R.C.A.P had been officially released and his Coruscant factory wasn't designed to construct such large droids efficiently. It didn't take very long to construct, due to those which he hired he paid a good deal to rush the construction but keep it up to standard, after all, he would make triple or more from what he spent on the place in the first few months the way business was going.
 
Hi, I'll be reviewing this today and have a few things to go over.



Dresden M'koor said:
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
First, your Historical Information is not up to snuff with what is required.


[Please include at least one paragraph on the structure's history. Detail how it came to be created and why. Talk about the people involved in this structure's history and what role it played and still plays. For historical structures, if you so desire, you can include historical events such as the Gulag Plague, the 400 years of darkness, and the Netherworld event where appropriate.]
Fill it in to that standard, note the one paragraph minimum, and go into detail about what purpose this serves and who was involved in its creation. Things like that.



Dresden M'koor said:
Accessibility: Only accessable by N.T.U. personnel. Access is gained through hand print and retinal scans.
Also, I see that it at least tells about how to get into the factory (assuming), but what of the facility itself? Is it only able to be gotten to from orbit, or something else? Go into detail on that.



Dresden M'koor said:
POINTS OF INTEREST
Another thing, it might be worth it to expand on what other places are involved in this places construction. You know, something interesting to go into what it can and can't do in itself; something to make it worth submitting.

Tag me when you've made the changes, and I'll be sure to look over it again soon!

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