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Approved Species Sean-Olc

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create the species that will be used for NPCs and Characters in the future
  • ​Image Credit: [SIZE=10pt]Here[/SIZE]
  • Canon: N/A
  • Links: [SIZE=10pt]Chaos[/SIZE]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Sean-Olc
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins: [SIZE=10pt]Chaos[/SIZE]
  • Average Lifespan: Unknown, assumed thousands of years
  • Estimated Population: Semi-Unique
  • Description: The Sean-Olc have pale skin, with dark hair and dark eyes. They are very tall and lanky, but possess a lean frame. They have typically very handsome features, and females look to be mostly childish in physical appearance, apart from their face. They also have an eerie and evil aura to them.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Type-IV
  • Average Height of Adults: Four Meters
  • Average Length of Adults: N/A
  • Skin Colour: Pale White
  • Hair Colour: Pitch Black
  • Distinctions: The Sean-Olc are an extremely tall race, with pale white skin and pitch black hair. Their eyes are usually darker tones of purple, blue, red, or in most cases, pure black. The males and females appear almost the same as each other, with the females of the species typically having a slightly smaller frame, with more pronounced body features. The species shows no physical signs of ageing. They Sean-Olc possess a lanky form, but this should not be confused for weakness, as they possess inhuman strength, with strength four times that of a Wookie, equalling roughly 24 times the strength of a normal human.
  • Races: None
  • Force Sensitivity: All
Strengths:
  • Force Sensitivity: The Sean-Olc possess a great aptitude for the Force, the Dark Side, specifically. With great potential should they be trained correctly.
  • Deceiving: The Sean-Olc are physically very strong, with four times the strength of a Wookie, with a typically lean frame.
  • Flight: The Sean-Olc possess a passive ability of flight, though the specifics of how they are capable of doing this are unknown.
  • Sneaky: The Sean-Olc's naturally dark colours make it easy for most members of the species to sneak around in darkness.
Weaknesses:
  • Light: The Sean-Olc are naturally weak to intense light, as it is able to cause them great pain should it come in direct contact with their skin.
  • Dark Willed: The Sean-Olc are a cruel and sadistic species, making them unable to wield most Light Side powers due to their evil nature.
  • Flight: The Sean-Olc's flight requires complete focus from all but the eldest and most proficient in it's use. This makes it impractical to use in combat and intense situations.
  • Large: The Sean-Olc are a naturally tall species, making it hard for them to blend in well, as they stand at almost twice the height of an average human male.
  • Force Sensitivity: While all members of the species are born sensitive to the force, none are born with the knowledge to use it.
CULTURE
  • Diet: Omnivore
  • Communication: Telepathy, Body Language
  • Technology Level: Stone Age
  • Religion/Beliefs: None
  • General Behaviour: The Sean-Olc typically find mates based on necessity, if two members of the species begin to near the end of their lifespan, they will reproduce, then separate, with the male educating the male children, and the female educating the female children. They are able to craft simple weapons such as spears, swords, daggers, etc with outstanding skill, however, they very rarely use these weapons, preferring to use their physical prowess and force skills over weaponry. They seem to scorn armour, preferring light robes or clothes, and most members of the species prefer clothing that covers their face and head. They take great pleasure in causing death and pain to others, and show great curiosity in beings with great power in the force. They were not created to kneel, and will very rarely submit to another, seeing all of their species as equals, regardless of power or age. They do not require sleep to sustain themselves, though they typically prefer to enter a dormant state during day cycles, and hunt during the night. If given the option between a short path that is lit up, or a long path that is shrouded in darkness, they would choose the long path. Intense light causes most of the species discomfort, and pain.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Sean-Olc originated from the Chaos Realm, known to Corellians as Hell, with the ability to travel between the two realms at will, though only in pitch black darkness. Unlike most things that come from Chaos, they are completely real, capable of death and being touched. They have very rarely been documented, and seem to simply disappear from images after a week of it being taken. They, however, are mentioned in folklore, though very rarely by their true name, and are described as the spirit of Evil, or Death. They have existed for Aeons, predating even the Je'daii Order, they are believed to have been one of the original species to emerge from the Void, and to inhabit the galaxy.

Most who have seen the Sean-Olc, or who have heard stories of them, believe them to be the physical embodiment of the Bogan, the Dark Side, however extreme and preposterous it sounds. Some have called them Sithspawn, though none are able to label the Sith who created them. They have survived events such as the Cold War, the Thousand Year Darkness, the Clone Wars, Order 66, and the Galactic Empire. They have emerged unchanged and remained uninvolved in this events.
 
Hello! First of all, amazing submission. I like the dark, eerie vibes this has going on and I am a sucker for the Dementor design. Good stuff. However, there are a few things that must be addressed.

First:

Naithair said:
Force Sensitivity: All
Please ensure that your weaknesses and strengths follow through with the requirements for this sensitivity. In other words, unless their powers are passive and/or not affiliated with the Force, they are prohibited from automatically having active abilities such as Lightning, Force Choke, etc. While individuals, such as NPCS, are capable of developing powers, the race entirely cannot automatically have them. If you wish to have this race as a whole possess active powers, you will have to change the race's Force Sensitivity to Many. Until such time if you wish to do so, please add the above weakness to your list.

References for All Force Sensitive rules can be found at the top of this page: https://starwarsrp.net/topic/140413-species-creation-30/

Second:

Naithair said:
Communication: Telepathy, Body Language, Irish Gaelic
Unfortunately, we cannot use real world dialects on this board. You will need to change Irish Gaelic to something from the SW universe or come up with your own language.

Now, as for suggestions, I personally recommend removing the hard numbers of your population

Naithair said:
Estimated Population: Semi-Unique: Ten
. Having hard numbers, in my opinion, can be a problem and limiting because of the ebb and flow of this board. Simply having Semi-Unique is enough to denote that the population is limited. However, this is not a requirement.

Overall, this is a very nice submission and I look forward to working with you on this!
 

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Added the weakness you suggested, removed the number on their population, and removed the real-world language. Let me know if you need anything else changed.
 
[member="Naithair"] Alrighty! Thank you for your cooperation. Everything looks good to me here, so I will pass it on for approval!

[member="Scherezade deWinter"] Pending Trainer Approval
 
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