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Approved Tech Rhys's Personal Rifle

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To provide weapons for Rhys to use in combat
  • Image Source: Created on Midjourney
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Blaster rifle
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Rhys Swynol
  • Affiliation: (Rhys Swynol)
  • Market Status: (Closed-Market )
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: The scale is Unique
  • Material: Durasteel, blaster components, songsteel
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Blaster
  • Size: Large
  • Weight: Light
  • Ammunition Type: Power cell
  • Ammunition Capacity: Large
  • Effective Range: Long Range
  • Rate of Fire: High
  • Damage Output: High
  • Recoil: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Has a scope attached to increase range and has some components made from songsteel to lower the weight of the weapon.
STRENGTHS
  • Scope increases accuracy and the effective range of combat
  • The use of songsteel improves weight and turns the weapon into a lighter weight
  • Large ammo capacity means that the weapon can fire for prolonged periods of time
  • A high rate of fire and damage output means that it can hit often and hit a person hard
WEAKNESSES
  • Can be destroyed by Force Users
  • Can be destroyed by Lightsabers - while some components are made from songsteel to reduce the weight, it is still mostly Durasteel so can still be rendered useless by a Lightsaber
  • Can overheat causing the weapon to jam
  • EMPs can disrupt the electronics
  • Extreme heat can destroy the weapon completely
DESCRIPTION
Rhys bought a standard blaster rifle that he decided to modify, upgrade and adapt the weapon to his own preferences. The scope increased his range on the battlefield, the lightweight means that he can carry it easily and not worry about being over encumbered as well as being able to run with the rifle in his hands.
 
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Ravenfire

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Rhys Swynol Rhys Swynol

Hi there I will be looking over this submission today.

So lets begin with your 1 over on ratings so please lower something to balance it out.

Under special features you might want to just add the songsteel and the scope.

Being able to be destroyed by force users and lightsabres are not a great weakness also its got songsteel as part of the construction which is a lightsabre resistant material and thus may make it more resistant to lightsabres.

Overheating and extreme heat are kinda the same thing suggesting that this weapon can get overheated and destroyed. Yes or no?
 
Ravenfire Ravenfire

Lowered ammo capacity to balance to the submission.

Added songsteel and scope to special features as requested.

Expanded upon the fact that this weapon does not resistant Lightsabers even though it has some Lightsaber resistant elements. This weapon can still be destroyed by them and I stand by that weakness.

The Force User weakness remains as it is a solid weakness since there are many Force powers available to people to use to destroy and break this weapon, there is nothing designed into this weapon to prevent that and I do not see how listing it as a weakness is not appropriate for roleplay factor.

I clarified there is a difference between the weapon overheating and extreme external heat.
 

Ravenfire

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Rhys Swynol Rhys Swynol

Awesome, so still similar thing to your other sub, you don't need to additional stuff in the brackets under special feature, strengths and weaknesses. Also same thing for the force user weakness. Your choice.

Let me know once thats done and you should be good to be approved.
 
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