Approved Lore Reborn Knights

[Damion Dorian Tarkin]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To act as a primary Guard service for anything related to Zakuul Or Draconia
• Image Credit: Flag
• Canon: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Links: N/A

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Organization Name: Reborn Knights
• Classification: Royal Guard, Royal Army
• Affiliation: The combined People of Zakuul, and Draconia
• Organization Symbol: Based upon the old Draconion Royal Knights
• Description: The protection to important Individuals within the Shared Alliance Of Zakuul and Draconia. Loyal and heavy armed and trained warriors willing to giver there lives to complete any task that the Monarchs give them

GEOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION

• Headquarters:
  • The Spire (Zakuul)
  • Dragonfell (Draconia)
• Domain: N/A
• Notable Assets: N/A

SOCIAL INFORMATION

• Hierarchy:
  • Lord-Commander (1)
  • Generals (5)
  • Advisors (5)
• Membership: Massive Tournaments and wargames operations are organized. And the best of these wargames are allowed membership if accepted. Anyone Can join these wargames, but only the best are taken
• Climate: Potentially deadly, but mostly just protecting and ceremonial
• Reputation: Good -Much like ceremonial for the people.
• Curios: Lightsaber Pikes, Shields, Specialized Armor
• Rules:
  • "Be the blade that hits the Eye"
  • "Be the shield that stops the storm"
  • "Be the armor that Protects the People"
  • "Be the Knight, you were made to be"
• Goals: To act as guards for important figureheads and their family, Will slowly expand as more planets enter the fold
  • How: The Knights are dedacated fanatics Loyal to the Crown of the respected ruler of each planet. Being the most trained of all warriors, they will fight and die by there leaders orders.

MEMBERS
N/A (Currently)

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Upon the Alliance of Draconia, and Zakuul Both Royal Family's agreed that one first order of friendship was to combined the royal guard. "The Zakuul Knights", and "Draconion Guard" We combined into the "Reborn knights"

Upon being sleet for the specialized trained, each future guard undergo's years of brutal but effective training. Training that is meant to break down the mind, and rebuild it, with the proper ideals.

Each Knight is loyal, and willing to do anything to protect and serve

Any man or women may try and prove them self's to join the guard, but only the proper chosen can pass with the skills needed.
Force-users are allowed but not required to be accepted

 

[Darth Strosius]

Damion Dorian Tarkin

Another fairly solid submission you have here! There are again just a couple areas that need some additions and modification before I approve this for ya!

Mainly the Links bullet point shouldn't have the template text in it and should instead either by filled by appropriate links or simply an N/A. Also in Affiliation a link for the planets would be appreciated as well!

As for the areas where I'd prefer to see some greater detail, Description is a bit lacking. How do they go about protecting the families and what other individuals are their services given to? How do they perform these tasks? Are they solemn ceremonial guards or brutally efficient warriors that die for their masters? Just a brief overview of who they are and how they do what they do. Historical Information is also lacking a fair bit. How did the combination of these guards shape how the existing group functions? How have they changed over time or if they haven't then why? If they all have lightsaber pikes then are they all Force Sensitive? Where do they acquire such weapons from if not? Just some more details like that!

 

[Damion Dorian Tarkin]

Added some detail to Historical and Description, As well as fixed links and bullets' points
Darth Strosius

 

[Darth Strosius]

Damion Dorian Tarkin

Alrighty it looks good to me!

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