RAXUS

[geargun]

Corporation Name: RAXUS
Headquarters: Concordia
Locations: Mandalore
Operations: We make armor and weapons tech for your safety.
Rationale: While having a personal hobby of tinkering with weapons, armor, and various types of technology, Raider decided to make business out of his tinkering to earn a side profit and to grow his skill, by creating different armor, weapons and tech. Also to become more widely known for his skills he knew the only way to advance his armor and weapons crafting skills was to start a company. Raider knew the only way to start his company was with a bit of extra money and he did this very skillfully. He blackmailed one of the lower hutt cartel members by threatening to turn him in for selling sith secrets to the jedi until the hutt gave into giving him the supplies necessary to start a company. From there a few sith leaders weren't to happy to learn that their plans were being sold to the jedi's. After that it was just clever marketing.
Tier: 2
Description: We make armor and weapons for better survival rate on the battlefield and in the wilderness. We make gear for all types - do you like being sneaky? I'm sure we have something for that. Do you like minimal armor but still want protection we got you covered? Want to get those silent kills? We got you. We help everyone from junk dealers to armies out on the field. Heck, we'll even do some custom stuff if you ask nicely and bring your own materials. We will even make lightsabers if you want, we even make multi purpose weapons and armor.

Subsidiaries: none

 

[geargun]

if i need to change anything just tell me

 

[Hailyn]

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[Hailyn]

[member="Raider atrok"]
Please go through the submission and proofread it, fix any grammatical and spelling errors you might find.

Rationale: raider has a hobby of making armor and weapons so he thought why not share to help protect

For a tier 2 this needs to be at least a paragraph of detail.

 

[geargun]

thank you i will change it

 

[Hailyn]

[member="Raider atrok"]
I'm not sure if you're using mobile, in which case I apologize, but I need there to be correct punctuation (periods, commas) and correct capitalization (such as capital pronouns, such as names or locations, and first letters of the first word of each sentence).

 

[geargun]

ok i will get on it

 

[geargun]

omg what happend to it why does it look like that

 

[Hailyn]

[member="Raider atrok"]
I will try to fix this for you

 

[Hailyn]

We will even make lightsabers if you want, we even make multi purpose weapons and armor.

Lightsabers cannot be produced in large or minor quantities, so I am going to give you a heads up that any lightsabers you might submit, using this line as reasoning, must be Semi-Unique or below in production.


I have also corrected the formatting error with your submission.

 

[geargun]

Yeah I meant like custom for one person

 

[geargun]

And thank you

 

[Hailyn]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Jacobs"]

 

[Cira]

Approved.