Approved Location Ravensclaw Farm

[Rianna Organa-Ar'klim]

Name: Ravensclaw Farm
Image Source:
Fields of Sargheet: http://www.toptenstuffs.com/wp-content/uploads/Farm-Loans.jpg
Ravensclaw Farmhouse: http://ww1.hdnux.com/photos/14/53/27/3323360/3/960x540.jpg
Silos for storage: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/fb/Ralls_Texas_Grain_Silos_2010.jpg.
Barn for storage of equipment and domestic animals: http://www.neccmillerton.org/images/silver_mountain_hay_barn.jpg
Intent: Alexis inherited the farm from her parents when they died, it generates an income for her. It also provides a means for her to interact with other businesses, and planets to supply them with needed grains.
Classification: Farm
Location: Dagro, 20 clicks from Vale City
Affliation: Alexis is a member of Witches of Dathomir, Farm is owned solely by Alexis Ravensclaw
Description:
Ravensclaw farm is 20 acres of farmland used to grow the crop Sargheet. The house upon has come down through two generations of farmers. Alexis Ravensclaw is the only one who at this time would make use of this location, using it for trips home, business arrangements. The Witches of Dathomir and the Mandalorians would be the main factions to be involved. The rooms of the farmhouse are spacious and open, there are lots of windows which when one stands in front of them can see the fields in many directions.
History: Optional
Links: Optional and also N/A

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Alexis Ravensclaw"]

Please edit this to include the full template, as the 'do not alter template' rule is not optional. Only then will I judge your submission.

Any time you make a submission with an incomplete template from this time, onward, your submission will be archived and you will have to resubmit it in its full and proper form.

 

[Rianna Organa-Ar'klim]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"]

I haven't done many of these submissions I try to get all the info at once sometimes I guess my cut and paste doesn't capture it all. I don't know. Anyhow I made the changes.

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Alexis Ravensclaw"]

Thank you for your compliance! I apologize for the wait - I've been sick, I was away all weekend, and sometimes I forget that perhaps I should post an LOA until I'm almost back, anyhow.

Well, this looks nice and simple, but I'd like you to think if there would be any other structures on this property. Typically a farm of any kind will have more than just the land on which the crop is grown, and the residence in which the landowners live. There'll be some sort of other structure(s) dedicated to the work, e.g. barn(s), silo(s) for storing the grains, and so on. If this is an inherited property with land that has been worked for years, there will be other structures present already.

So, do that, and this should be ready to go.

 

[Rianna Organa-Ar'klim]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"]. Oooo I had not considered that. Let me fix.

 

[Rianna Organa-Ar'klim]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"] I have updated to include silos and a barn. Thank you!

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Alexis Ravensclaw"]

No, thank you. That's exactly what I was looking for. As I see no further issues with this, consider it pending further approval!

 

[Nikolas Faselli]

[member="Alexis Ravensclaw"]

A farm... :wub: You get all of my love.

Approved.