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Approved Location Prudii Kyr'am Mandalorian clan compound

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Prazutis

Prudii Kyr'am Alor/Mandalorian Elder
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
▪ Intent: the base/compound of my Mandalorian clan

▪ Image Credit: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dxun

https://galacticnewssl.wordpress.com/?s=Dxun&submit=Search

https://i1.wp.com/farm8.staticflickr.com/7021/6698389813_da346f5995_m.jpg

▪ Canon: it's LEGENDS http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dxun

▪ Links: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/130541-rebuilding-history/#entry1798951

SETTING INFORMATION
▪ Structure Name: Prudii Kyr'am compound (formerly known as Ordo clan outpost)

▪ Classification: Homestead/Farm/factory


▪ Location: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dxun


▪ Affiliation: Prudii Kyr'am Mandalorian clan

▪ Accessibility: The compound is very well hidden deep within the jungles of Dxun. There is no closed gates, but there is scanners everywhere and outsiders are not welcome.


▪ Description:
The planet is covered in mass jungles and constantly raining, the sight in particular was once a great camp now in ruins but being Restored by the Mandalorian clan Prudii Kyr'am. There is many sights to see and explore. Caves of mystery are a thing to behold, whats inside could vary you'll have to explore to find out. The great waterfall is a massive 100 meter waterfall thats great place for swimming or relaxing. Back at the Prudii Kyr'am Compound you'll have plenty to do with free entertainment and drinks at the Cantina as well as the market place where fresh produce and various other goods are sold such as materials and a stand for Kyr'am Munitions to purchase weapons.


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AFTER REBUILD PHOTOS
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POINTS OF INTEREST
FREEDON NAD'S TOMB
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THE GREAT WATERFALL
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CRASHED SHIP
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THE DXUN JUNGLE
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AFTER REBUILD

RIDITIR CANTINA
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MARKET PLACE
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SECURITY
6x Automated sentry Guns
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Automated_sentry_gun

Heat pit sensors
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Heat-pit_sensor

Life form indicator (LFI)
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Heat-pit_sensor

electro photo receptor (EPR)
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Electro_photo_receptor


HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Mandalorians begun at this location with Revan, The jedi exile meetra surik and a band of other Jedi and republic troops. The jungle was littered with dead bodies for years to come.After the jedi civil war the Jedi Exile return to Dxun to aid the mandalorians and enter the tomb of Freedon Nad. 1,000 Years later Darth bane would enter the tomb to gather information about the mighty sith lord to further his knowledge into the darkside. The planet eventually just became overgrown and not bothered with until several millineia later.
Around 504 ABY A'den Kyr'am was born into the Mandalorian clan Prudii Kyr'am which had taken over Dxun. In 522 sith lords had come to Dxun to raid Freedon Nads tomb, All but one member of Prudii Kyr'am was murdered. A'den Kyr'am was left for dead. 30 years later A'den returned and visited the planet not knowing he was walking into a trap that would cryogeniclly freeze him for 300 years. 301 years later A'den Kyr'am would return to restore Dxun to its glorious Mandalorian days.
 

Arekk

The Flesh Of Fallen Angels
Writer
Alright, there's a bunch of things here that need fixing. This is what you need to get done before I can approve this:

Image Credit: Wookiepedia
You need to provide links for ALL the images you've used here. Read more about how to do that here.

Structure Name: Prudii Kyr'am compound (formerly known as Ordo clan outpost)
This is a canon location. If your intent is to use this location then you must adhere by the following rule:

"Canon locations submitted to Codex must adhere to the general setting of the original location and may not contradict Star Wars canon history. Canon locations with significant changes will require substantial reasoning and explanation of intent."

Besides that, you must give proper credits and source the information if you decide use this canon location.

Affiliation: Prudii Kyr'am Mandalorian clan
There's a link for this clan? That could be either a Wookieepedia article, forum submission, faction, yourself, etc. If so, provide it.

Description:
I'm gonna need a lot more effort by explaining each location using clear and concise language, going into detail about what they are, how important they are and add some general information instead of just outlining each place with an image.

Make sure the images are in a spoiler or resize them if they're too big.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
This is straight plagiarism from the Wookieepedia article for the planet of Dxun. This is against the rules, so I'll ask you kindly to write this with your own words.

Remove this.

In a nutshell, I need to see more effort put into this submission. Just make sure everything is done according to the rules and following the respective guidelines.

[member="A'den Kyr'am"]
 

Arekk

The Flesh Of Fallen Angels
Writer
Since your second chance has been denied, I'll continue to judge this. The edits are yet to be made, so let me know when everything is done.

[member="A'den Kyr'am"]
 
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