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LFG Performance Review

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Ronhar Tane

Salvage Team Six
Ronhar Tane
Character Bio
Hey folks! It's me again, Ronhar Tane Ronhar Tane . Some of you may or may not know, but the Mahporeem Imperial Remnant just went major very recently! As such, I've been working on an overarching government that is more suitable to rule over the larger amount of territory we'll be responsible for, and I came up with Mahporeem High Command. We're still getting the positions filled, but there are two positions in particular I'm keeping a close eye on: Grand Marshal and Grand Admiral.

My good friend Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen has expressed interest in the Grand Admiral position, but I can't just give it to him now can I? I need to test him somehow. My plan was to have in participate in a simulated battle using one of N&Z's excellent simulation chambers and modules but then I thought that having NPC opposition might be a bit boring. So here's my pitch:

I'm looking for naval opposition for Marlon in this simulated battle, and because its simulated, you can bring just about anything with having any risk of damaging or losing your stuff. We can plan things out depending on what interest we get, but the basic gist as that we can go nuts with fleet sizes and units. What do you guys think? I might also do a ground invasion type deal as well if people want to fight a ground battle. Any interest in this idea?
 
Major Faction

Ronhar Tane

Salvage Team Six
Ronhar Tane
Character Bio

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Ash is defined as the powdery residue that is left after something is burned.

The Mahporeem Imperial Remnant, being something of an industrial juggernaut, is quite familiar with the sight, smell and feel of ash, and the substance is quite prevalent throughout Imperial held space. Yet, for all the ash one can find throughout Mahporeem's territory, there is still one location where the namesakee substance has left an even larger mark than it ever could on Mahporeem: the Ash Worlds. Devastated by ancient wars from thousands of years ago, the enigmatic Ash Worlds have sat on the doorstep of Mahporeem ever since their destruction, and now that the Imperial Remnant is enjoying a resurgence of power, they wish to investigate just what exactly remains in the sector. If there experience for Rusito has taught them anything, its not to judge a planet by its initial appearance...

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OBJECTIVE I: PERFORMANCE REVIEW
[PvP, Fleeters]

Commander. Admiral. Imperial. Traitor. Though their are many ways that one might describe Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen , what is not up for debate is his impeccable naval record as a military officer. His victories speak for themselves, and after Marlon's pivotal role in destroying the Third Death Star, one one can doubt his military acumen and penchant for defeating his foes, no matter how the odds may be stacked against him. Yet, a series of political blunders during his tenure with the Imperial Confederation have caused some to doubt his ability to lead, and these voices have only been magnified with Sularen's promotion to Grand Admiral. Today, Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen seeks to silence his critics once and for all. On the uninhabited world of Cophrigin V, the Mahporeem Imperial Remnant has established a simulation chamber for Marlon to show off his skills and experience as a seasoned naval commander. Though his enemies are fake, the stakes are not, and Marlon's performance will determine his future with the Imperial Remnant going forward. Will he rise to the occasion as he's done so many times before, or will the pressure crack him like Alderaan being destroyed by the original Death Star?

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OBJECTIVE II: VIEWING GALLERY
[Social]

In addition to the simulation chamber itself, the Imperial Remnant has constructed an entire base around Marlon's test, complete with a viewing gallery and all the amenities one might expect on any civilized planet. Particularly interesting is the fact that members of the Iron Covenant and High Republic have been invited to observe Marlon's progress as he navigates the intricacies of the challenge he faces before himself. Yet the question remains why? Is the Imperial Remnant trying to up the pressure on Marlon even further by having outside observers take note of his progress? Or is there something else going on here, something that no one knows about besides the Imperial Remnant? Regardless of Mahporeem's intentions, visitors are encouraged to eat, drink, socialize and observe the simulated battle.

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OBJECTIVE III: THAT'S...A LOT OF MOONS
[PvP, PvE,]

Much like the former Supreme Commander and now Grand Admiral, the planet lego can be described in as many ways, though it is most commonly called the "Planet of a Thousand Moons". Each moon is just as unique as the next, almost as if a separate planet, and there is no telling what one might find when landing on any man. The Mahporeem Imperial Remnant has begun surveys of all these moons and the planet lego itself, sending its naval and ground forces to take control of the system, though doing so remains a time consuming and lengthy process. Still, the potential rewards are more than worth it, though no one knows for certain what kind of creatures lurk throughout the system, or whether or not such creatures are sentient. If rumors are to be believed, there is no shortage of potential hostiles that will need to be dealt with upon landing in the system...


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Alright folks, I have an initial write up to make things a bit more clear. Let me know what you think and if anyone else wants to join! I will make some banner art and set a date later!
 
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