Feedback One Year a Smooth Criminal

[Kinley Pryse]

Kinley has officially existed for an entire year. This is a huge accomplishment for my flaky self. She has quickly become my favorite character.

I am curious to see how others feel and appreciate any feedback

Happy New Years!

 

[Lysander von Ascania]

Big congrats on sticking with Kinley for a full year! Consistency like that is huge. Also congrats on earning a bounty by stealing jewels at the masquerade. Iconic behavior xD. I like checking in on the BSS threads from time to time, and she's always fun to read. Definitely keep writing her! It's cool to see characters in their own space outside of Force politics.

 

[Aurelian Veruna]

I enjoy Kinley. When I do see her around it's usually a very amusing read, very entertaining. I think she's got main character energy, so to see you dive fully into her would be fantastic. Keep it up! Congrats on the year with her.

 

[Vemric Keldra]

Kinley has officially existed for an entire year. This is a huge accomplishment for my flaky self. She has quickly become my favorite character.

I am curious to see how others feel and appreciate any feedback

Happy New Years!

I've been scoping out this thread to see if anyone says anything of substance.

I'll be honest - Kinley is easily my most favourite character of yours due to her backstory and what drives her through her criminal endeavours - even if she gets lost in the lie. I love how everything comes togethether with this character and what ultimately makes her tick. I just love the nuance of the character. She is ultimately complex while simultaneously being the SMOOTH CRIMINAL.

I love reading her exports and how she progresses/devolves. She's a vibe to read, quite honestly. So continue on the road your on now. I want to see where the story goes - does she lose herself in the lie or does she redeem herself. I love the intrigue.

 

[Kinley Pryse]

Vemric Keldra aww thank you for the kind words!!

She is easily my favorite too. She’s so much fun to write!

I just started her second arc where she will be getting in deeper with Black Sun. ^___^