Omega Orbital Defense Weapons Platform

[Noah Corek]

Credit: http://www.moddb.com...efense-platform
Intent: To create a Orbital Platform for Omega to use to protect major planets from invasions.
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Fondor Shipyards (Hull) Corek Custom Weapons Inc. (Weapons) Hekler'Kok Defense Industries (Weapons)
Model: Omega Orbital Defense Weapon Platform
Affiliation: Omega Protectorate
Modularity: No
Production: Mass-Produced
Material: Durasteel Alloy
Description: The Omega Orbital Defense Platform, or O-ODP for short, was devised for the need to give every planet in Omega's territory a form of defense, whether it be from Pirates to the Fringe, the Confederation or the small fraction of Bando Gora still alive after their crushing defeat at Gehenna. The system is automated, all of them being slaved to multiple computers scattered around the planet, each computer controls a different region of the defense grid of the planet. The platform is relatively small,being only 75 meters long, it makes up for this in sheer numbers, with a hundred being fielded already and another hundred more predicted in the next month. While there are some downsides to it as well, low weapon count,small stature and its ability to be slave to only a few computers, but it can be shut down with a remote kill switch in need be.
Classification: Orbital Defense Platform
Role: Assault
Height: 10 Meters
Width: 75 Meters
Length: 75 Meters
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Solar Ionaztion
Hyperdrive Rating: N/A
Minimum Crew: N/A
Optimal Crew: N/A
Armaments: 4 Dual Heavy Turbolaser Cannons, 8 Flak Cannons and 4 Proton Torpedo Launchers
Hangar: N/A
Non-Combative Attachments: Advanced Sensor Array, Advanced Targeting System and Heavy Shields
Passenger Capacity: N/A
Cargo Capacity: N/A
Consumables: 2 Weeks
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: N/A

 

[Domino]

You need spaces after commas.
[member="Noah Corek"]

 

[Noah Corek]

[member="Domino"]
Done.

 

[Domino]

Alright, I understand what you're trying to do (disposable space-bunker), but there's a few problems here.

• Only your thrusters are receiving power.
• A ship will have to physically dock with thousands of these every 2 weeks to refuel them.
• You have thousands of these out with 'thousands more predicted in the next month,' divided among 87 planets. That is block out the sun type stuff.
• As this is mobile it's no longer counted as a station and thus looses the 50% gun bonus as a military station.
• The length is closer to a heavy dropship's rather than a corvette's meaning you're drawing from the wrong pool.
• You need to label this as balanced, assault, or support.
• You'r measurements don't match the dimensions pictured.

[member="Noah Corek"]

 

[Noah Corek]

[member="Domino"]
Done.

 

[Domino]

You haven't corrected the complete list, please read it carefully and compare it to your sub. There are also no such things as quad flack guns unless you want each to count as four guns; in which case this has way too many defensive weapons.
[member="Noah Corek"]