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Approved Tech Old Knight Idol

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Intent: To create an artifact for Tanaski Yumi

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Name: Old Knight Idol

Manufacturer: Unknown

Affiliation: Tanaski Yumi

Modularity: No

Production: Unique

Material: Krayt Dragon Bone (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Krayt_dragon)

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Protective Idol

Size: Small

Weight: Light

SPECIAL FEATURES

Ancient Idol that allows one to walk on bodies of water

Reduces all kinetic weapon damage received from the front by ninety percent

Slows the descent of long falls to survivable levels, no matter how high one falls

Repels dark spirits.

Cannot be held or manipulated with the Force by Dark Adepts.

Any container idol is placed on cannot be opened, lifted, or manipulated with the Force by Dark Adepts.

Any doorway the idol is placed behind of cannot be opened with the Force.

Vibroweapons won't overload if hit with electricity when Idol is equipped.

Becomes very bright in very dark environments.

Strengths:

Emergency surface: The idol possesses the astounding ability to allow one to walk on water as long as it is equipped and they maintain maximum concentration channeling the Force through the idol as they do.

Frontal Protection: So long as it is on your person all damage you take from the front from kinetic or slugthrower weapons is reduced by ninety percent.

Long fall bonus: With the idol in your possession, you can fall from the very tallest of skyscrapers and the idol will reduce the speed of your fall to survivable levels

Anathema to darkness: It repels spirits, and cannot be held nor manipulated with the Force by Dark Adepts, and the same goes for any barrier they are placed behind or any container they are placed atop of.

Defensive: The idol will prevent any vibroweapon equipped from being overloaded with electricity. Breath Control much easier to call upon.

Emergency light: Lights up in Dark caves

Weaknesses:

Voids: Will not function at all in a Force void.

Offensive weakness: Offensive Force powers cost twice as much mental exertion.

Seismic: If a seismic disturbance knocks it over, any container or doorway it was protecting losses its protective effects.

Indirect: Just because you cannot directly knock it aside, does not mean you cannot throw something to knock it aside, or have someone who is not a force user pick it up.

Not alchemized: Can be destroyed, with enough, albeit significant effort

Frontal only: Does nothing to protect the sides or back.

Survivable, not unscathed: When falling, though it will be reduced to survivable levels, that does not mean you will not sustain disabling injuries on impact.

Cryo: All vibroweapons much more vulnerable to cryonic damage, causing them to chip easily.

Suppression: Being hit with Force Suppression while idol is equipped will disable its blessing for a minute, and cause painful, distracting migraines to the bearer for thirty seconds.


DESCRIPTION

The Old Knight Idol is one of many Relics Laertia kept over the years for "Rainy Day Insurance" Discovered in an old temple on Malachor, Laertia kept the powerful item once its properties became known to her via an accident with a slug thrower to the stomach. The Old Knight Relic is worn, weathered, scratched, and has passed from one Jedi to another to protect them against difficult adversaries. Blessed by the light rather than enchanted, the idol can still be destroyed, though given the power coursing through it, it would still be quite difficult.

Having taken a liking to [member="Tanaski Yumi"] after recent events, Laertia retrieved the ancient relic from a hiding spot on her vessel, delivering it to him in the hopes it will see him through many difficulties as he himself grows in the Force.
 
[member="Laertia Io"], First and foremost, thanks for taking the time to use the Factory! I'm going to be working with you so that we can get this trinket reviewed and approved. I just have a few things i would like to discuss and mention about it below.



Laertia Io said:
Modularity:
Please remember to include a rating here. Just a simple yes or no will suffice, no need to get crazy detailed.



Laertia Io said:
Material: Krayt Dragon Bone
Please remember to link all named materials to the submission



Laertia Io said:
Just a nit-picky bit or housekeeping here. If you could rename this to "Special Features" to keep with the template, that would be amazing.



Laertia Io said:
CONTENTS

Ancient Idol that allows one to walk on bodies of water

Reduces all kinetic weapon damage received from the front by ninety percent

Slows the descent of long falls to survivable levels, no matter how high one falls

Slightly reduces the effect of all Dark Side abilities.

Repels dark spirits.

Cannot be held or manipulated with the Force by Dark Adepts.

Any container idol is placed on cannot be opened, lifted, or manipulated with the Force by Dark Adepts.

Any doorway the idol is placed behind of cannot be opened with the Force.

All defensive force powers are improved by three times their potency.

Vibroweapons won't overload if hit with electricity when Idol is equipped.

Increased Resistance to alchemized poisons and skin contact poisons.

Becomes very bright in very dark environments.

Breath Control Far Easier to use
I would suggest here, that you consider toning the effects of this idol down a bit. That will likely prevents reports in the future, but this is up to you. If you do choose to tone this down a bit, just be sure to reflect that with what you've already included in your strengths/weaknesses. Either way I can approve this if you do or do not choose to limit some of these features

If you need any kind of clarification or rewording from myself with what i have said above, please do not hesitate to tag me and ask.
 
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