Feedback oki i do this too

[Kahlil Noble]

I always love doing these so why not do it again. For once it's not about just one character though! And it's been a long while since the last, so let's see what ya'll think if ya wanna toss something my way.

The characters:
Eliz Krayt
Kahlil Noble
Alina Tremiru
Xyoz Maji

They're really it when it comes to who I'm actively writing enough to warrant any kind of feedback. Hit me up on what you think. You like em? Dislike em? Have any advice on where you'd think their stories would be best to go? Lemmi know!

 

[Aayla Shan]

I love Alina Tremiru and I haven't really seen the others yet. I'm sure I'm gonna like Eliz Krayt when we get there though.

 

[Valery Noble]

When I first joined Chaos, you were one of the first writers I started a thread with. Pretty much instantly, I was really invested in the story and writing with you in general. The character Kahlil Noble was amazing and the chemistry between him and my character was really fun to do something with.

So when I returned about 2 months ago, writing with you again was one of the big things I really looked forward to, and it has been great! The stories have been keeping me in a constant state of excitement, the characters and their development have been interesting to me, and you're just one of the most pleasant writers to work with.

I don't think I'm the right person to judge someone's writing skills, but the way you write has always made it to where I'm eagerly awaiting your replies to my posts, and they always come quickly too So to me, you're doing it right - I'm having loads of fun, and you seem to be enjoying it all as well. That's what matters most in the end.



PS: Kahlil Noble should totally go back to the Light and his GF. nod nod