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Nova-Class Star Destroyer

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To create the first in a series of Star Destroyers from Starforge Industries
Image Source: https://artstation.com
Canon Link: N/A
Permissions: N/A
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Starforge Industries
  • Affiliation: Starforge Industries
  • Market Status: Open-Market
  • Model: Nova-Class Star Destroyer
  • Production: Mass produced
  • Material: Reinforced Durasteel, Quadranium Alloy

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Star Destroyer
  • Length: 1900 meters
  • Width: 850 meters
  • Height: 380 meters
  • Armament: Very High
- Quad Turbolaser Batteries (45)
- Heavy Ion Cannons (35)
- Concussion Missile Tubes (25)
- Laser Cannons (55)
- Defenses: Extreme
- Deflector Shield Generators (30)
- Quadranium Alloy Armor Plating
- Advanced ECM Suites for Electronic Warfare
  • Hangar Space: High
  • Hangar Allocations: 10
- Starfighter Squadrons: 7
- Support Craft Squadrons: 3
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: Average
  • Hyperdrive: Average | 1.6 [7.0 Backup]

STANDARD FEATURES
  • Advanced Sensor Array for Long-Range Detection
  • Command Bridge with Tactical Command Center
  • Crew Quarters and Barracks for Personnel
  • Engineering Section with Repair and Maintenance Facilities

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Enhanced Sensor Suite for Improved Target Detection
  • Reinforced Hull Plating for Increased Durability
  • Ion Shielding for Enhanced Defense against Ion-based Attacks

STRENGTHS
  • Formidable Armament capable of engaging various Threats
  • Exceptional Defensive Systems ensuring Superior Survivability
  • High Hangar Capacity for Starfighters and Support Craft

WEAKNESSES
  • Limited Maneuverability in Tight Spaces
  • Vulnerable to Prolonged Ion-based Assaults
  • Relatively Average Speed compared to smaller Vessels

DESCRIPTION
The Nova-Class Star Destroyer, crafted by Starforge Industries, stands as a symbol of power and destruction in the galaxy. Built from reinforced durasteel and Quadranium alloy, the Nova boasts unrivaled strength and resilience, capable of enduring the most intense of conflicts.

Armed with an array of turbolasers, ion cannons, missile launchers, and laser cannons, the Nova possesses overwhelming firepower to decimate enemy vessels with precision and overwhelming force. Its extreme defensive systems, including powerful deflector shield generators, Quadranium alloy armor plating, and advanced ECM suites, ensure its survival even in the most hostile environments.

Despite its formidable capabilities, the Nova faces limitations. Its immense size and mass limit its maneuverability, making it less agile in close-quarter combat scenarios. Additionally, while its speed is commendable for a vessel of its size, it may struggle to keep pace with smaller, swifter adversaries.

In summary, the Nova-Class Star Destroyer epitomizes Starforge Industries' commitment to excellence in ship design. With its unmatched firepower, superior defensive capabilities, and strategic versatility, the Nova is a force to be reckoned with, bringing terror to its enemies and victory to its allies across the galaxy.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
J Jason Grace

The design is very cool, but I found several problems:
  • I would like to ask you to link the Starforge Industries to the Manufacturer and Affiliation.
  • Your ratings are very overpowered, I would like to ask you to edit this.
  • And the Hangar Space high rating is only 10, not 11, please edit this:
    1500m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 6 | Average: 8 | High: 10 | Very High: 12 | Extreme: 15]
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
J Jason Grace

These are the fields which ones are part of the Ratings:
Production: The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (A single small unit, squad, or squadron), Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction.), Minor (Large groups of characters. (IE: A Single Major Faction, a few companies, or groups.), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.) Characters refer to NPCs & PCs.)
  • Armament: (You may provide your armament in list format and must provide your vessel an Armament Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Armament Ratings are scaled in relation to the class of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer.Armament Ratings provide only basic weaponry (ex. turbolasers, ion cannons, concussion missiles. laser cannons, etc) unless the ship also has a description of weapons. Please link to all Factory subs used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology)
  • Defenses: (You may provide your shield and armor systems in list format and must provide your vessel a Defense Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Where None is a man in a space suit hanging on to an engine, Average is typical defense, and Extreme is heaviest defense with heavy armor plating and multiple layers of powerful shields. Defensive Ratings are scaled in relation to the type of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. You should list particular systems under advanced systems. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Approved Technology)
  • Hangar Space: (Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )
1000m [Base: 1 | Very Low: 3 | Low: 4 | Average: 5 | High: 7 | Very High: 9 | Extreme: 11] 1500m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 6 | Average: 8 | High: 10 | Very High: 12 | Extreme: 15] 2000m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 5 | Low: 8 | Average: 11 | High: 14 | Very High: 17 | Extreme: 20]
  • Hangar Allocations: (This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above)
    • Starfighters: x squadrons
    • Support Craft: x squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. How agile is your ship? Can it take tight turns? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Maneuverability will be more agile than a Star Destroyer with a Low rating.
  • Speed Rating: (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. How fast is your ship in normal space? How fast can it take off, how fast can it speed through a planet's atmosphere? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Speed will be quicker than a Star Destroyer with a Low Speed.)

In the production's case:
Mass production: 0 point | Minor: -1 point | Limited: -2 points | Semi-Unique: -3 points | Unique: -4 points

In any other cases:
None: -3 points | Very Low: -2 points | Low: -1 point | Average: 0 point | High: +1 point | Very High: +2 points | Extreme: +3 points

You can also see here on this link that your points currently add up to +5. You need to bring this down to balance, i.e. 0.
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
Factory Judge
J Jason Grace

Update on this? I have to move the thread to the Archive soon according to the Factory policy. I can give you a few more days if you need them, until Monday (2024.02.26.), to make the necessary edits or indicate that you are asking for a few extra days for this.
 

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