Approved Tech Noah's Custom Tenloss Type 8 SMG

[Noah Corek]

Image Credit: http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/192/3/1/psgp__history_modernized_by_psgunlabproject-d56v8w3.jpg
Intent: To create another personalized Tenloss weapon that I like because it is a WWII weapon
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Tenloss Corporation (Manufacturer) Noah Corek (Customizer)
Model: Noah's Custom Tenloss Type 8 SMG
Affiliation: Tenloss Corporation, Open Market
Modularity: To modify it a little bit, Noah decided to thread the barrel, this allows it to have Suppressors, Compensators, Flash Hiders, Muzzle Brake
Production: Unique
Material: Trimantium-Titanium Alloy (Inner Workings and Shell), Light-Weight Polymer (Pistol Grip and Stock) and Quadanium Steel (Barrel)
Classification: Slugthrower/Blaster Hybrid Submachine Gun
Size: Handheld
Length: 68.3 Centimeters
Weight: 4.3 Kilograms
Ammunition Type: .45 Caliber Slugs and a Power Pack
Ammunition Capacity:

• 20 and 30 round stick magazines
• 50 and 100 round drum magazines
• 600 round power pack

Effective Range: 70m
Maximum Range: 200m
Rate of Fire: Semi Automatic and Fully Automatic (Built-In Fire Selector)
Special Features:

• Energy enveloped slugs
• Semi and Fully automatic

Description: When the Tenloss Corporation Type 8 SMG came out, Noah saw a weapon that he could reforge into a great personal defense weapon and CQC weapon. The first thing done was to complete gut the weapon, examining the weapon and its parts, once Noah got a feel for these parts, he created all knew parts from scratch, milling new parts from a custom made Trimantium-Titanium alloy that allowed it to be more durable than the original Alusteel. Noah found even though the weapon was pretty accurate at close range, it still had a problem with accuracy on full auto. To solve this Noah replaced the barrel with one made of Quandanium Steel to be more accurate at slightly longer range and to prevent muzzle climb, it does this by making making the barrel heavier and thus reducing muzzle climb. Noah began thinking of a way to conceal this weapon better, his idea was a quick and simple fix, saw off stock and replace it with a folding stock instead. Noah reasoning for this was that because it was more suited for close range, a foregrip and a compensator would be enough to keep it on target at close range and it'd be easier to hid under a jacket or a coat and then in the flick of a wrist, the stock could be folded out and used for longer ranges.

Strengths:

• Great Stopping Power
• Rugged and Robust Design

Weaknesses:

• Inaccurate at long range
• Climbing Tendency without compensator

​Original Submission

 

[Ellie Mors]

I need a link to the original weapon in the submission somewhere for reference purposes.
[member="Noah Corek"]

Edit: Here is the link for you to add http://starwarsrp.net/topic/40644-tenloss-type-8-smg/

 

[Ellie Mors]

Also, if this is a unique modification, why are there references to the sale of ammunition packs? I want this combed over and any remnants of the original submission to be removed or made relevant to this submission. Things such as range and firing rate are fine to leave as they were, but I do not want to see portions of [member="Popo"]'s submission pasted over.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Popo"]
Please PM me or the writer rather than posting in someone else's submission. (Do not respond to this, please).

 

[Noah Corek]

[member="Silara Vantai"]
Edited.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Noah Corek"]
The modifications you have made to this weapon, by sawing off the stock mostly, will render accuracy outside of the immediate 20 meters nearly impossible without extremely restricted bursts of fire. While removing the stock certainly aids in hiding the weapon well, the removal of the stock is costly on accuracy and the change in the barrel to make it heavier actually makes it even more inaccurate as it uses a pistol caliber round for ammunition. A compensator, also known as a muzzle break, is something which redirects the gases expelled during firing to counteract unwanted recoil, this will not compensate for the removal of the stock in any form.

RESEARCH REVIEW PRELIMINARY
SW CANON

• N/A

SWRP CANON

• http://starwarsrp.net/topic/40644-tenloss-type-8-smg/

WITHOUT DEV THREADS PRELIMINARY REVIEW

• Reduce effective range from 70 to 40 m and make a note that sustained fire without pause reduces accuracy significantly

​or

• Adjust changes so that accuracy is not reduced.

WITH DEV THREADS PRELIMINARY REVIEW

• N/A

SUGGESTIONS

• N/A

 

[Noah Corek]

[member="Silara Vantai"]
Edited.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Noah Corek"]
What changes were made, outside of the stock?

Also, looking at your modularity, a compensator and muzzle break are the same thing.

 

[Noah Corek]

[member="Silara Vantai"]
Silara. I'm not trying to be disrespectful, but a muzzle brake and a compensator are not the same thing. A muzzle brake is designed to reduce the kick of a weapon, while a compensator is designed to reduce the hop up of a weapon.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Silara Vantai"]
Silara. I'm not trying to be disrespectful, but a muzzle brake and a compensator are not the same thing. A muzzle brake is designed to reduce the kick of a weapon, while a compensator is designed to reduce the hop up of a weapon.

Please refer to my previous post that I provided a link for a compensator. If you have any other information, a link for example, pm me. I like to learn, so I'd appreciate anything you can give me

 

[Ellie Mors]

To solve this Noah replaced the barrel with one made of Quandanium Steel to be more accurate at slightly longer range and to prevent muzzle climb.

Just explain how this does the job in the description and you should be fine.

 

[Noah Corek]

[member="Silara Vantai"]
Done.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved, pending secondary.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.