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Approved NPC Nicole Heming

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Name: Nicole Heming
Loyalties: Was Corruck Kazen before death
Role: Dear Friend before death
Development Threads: None

Age: 19 at time of death
Species: Human
Force-Sensitive: Quite powerful, though nowhere near trained Sith or Jedi before death
Appearance: Purple hair, lightly tanned skin, blue eyes, face is somewhat more contemplative. She is about 1.6 meters, she has a birth mark on the back of her left hand. It had the appearance of a curved star. Her face and skin is clean of freckles. She is young retained the beauty of youth. Her form was shapely and well toned. She was very flexible and lithe during her life, though she rarely showed any of the skills that would have been in conjunction with that.
Personality: Peaceful, with a belief in the Force above all else. She believes that nothing can surpass the Force in priority.

Weapon of Choice: Had been the Force before death
Wealth: None
Combat Function: None
Skills: She had become very powerful in visions through the Force, before death
Notable Possessions: None

Other Notes: She had been a close friend of Corruck's. She had helped keep his more dangerous outbursts in control. She had been his friend during his time as a heartless crime lord. She had been very faithful and always telling him that he would find salvation. Of course, he had not believed her and at some point killed her. He shot her, growing tired of her continuing intervention in his own business. It was soon after this that Corruck would take a probably permanent leave from the crime business. She let him do it because she had had a vision that her death would save him. She had had feelings for him that he had not returned at the time. As she had predicted, her death had partly saved him from himself. He regrets that decision every day.
 
[member="Corruck Kazen"]

Could you please go into more detail in her description, or provide a picture if you have one?

Remember, someone will potentially be NPCing this character, you have to give them something to work with.
 
Sorry, don't have a picture.

I did add the following to the description:

She is about 1.6 meters, she has a birth mark on the back of her left hand. It had the appearance of a curved star. Her face and skin is clean of freckles. She is young retained the beauty of youth. Her form was shapely and well toned. She was very flexible and lithe during her life, though she rarely showed any of the skills that would have been in conjunction with that.

Thanks for letting me know it needed work, is that better?

[member="Quietus"]
 
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