New Character Feedback: Rebel

[Cortana Jade]

So, I started a new character which happens to be Rebel, and it feels good to build a character from the bottom up. The last time i've done that was with [member="Sochi Ru"]. I'm having fun writing him as he's much different from my usual type.

For those of you who have RP'd with him and or those of you who have checked him out in any form of fashion I'd like feedback or even ideas of things you'd like to see from him.

I've re-written him a few times, but I've finally settled on gearing him to be a tracker, a field agent of sorts. Like Tholme and Quinlan Vos etc.

I'm working my way up to that, kind of procrastinating on the one thread that counts the most in his training but...

Uhm feel free to comment or whatever :lol:

Happy writing!

 

[Myles Vylumnar]

[member="Rebel Sunka"] Seems like a great idea, but I want to see you flesh it out and really build Rebel up. Consider finding him a love interest to really play on that Quinlan Vos-type dynamic.

 

[Trextan Voidstalker]

[member="Rebel Sunka"]

I'm finding his internal monologue and dialogue very genuine to the character at the moment, it's good.

Once we've got further into our thread I'll try and think of some useful constructive criticism.

 

[Cortana Jade]

[member="Myles Vylumnar"] funny you mention because I was thinking of finding him a love interest so that he has an emotional crutch to help keep him from relapse etc and other things like that. His crush [member="Aela Talith"] turned him down no but seriously I am looking into that aspect to see who's around, interested, and interesting.

[member="Trextan Voidstalker"] awesome, yeah let me know. I really want him to sort've find his niche here. Discover something about himself.