Evangeline Cross
Show Me the Horizon
Hi everyone!
Evangeline here was my first character here on Chaos, so she's quite near and dear to my heart. I've always envisioned her as being very quiet and internal, but unfortunately this has a negative impact on my roleplaying. Because I imagine her being such a thinker, I've found that my writing tends to be heavily weighted down by lengthy descriptions of her thoughts, feelings, internal reactions, etc. This means that my posts tend to be slow and do very little to move the actual action along.
I am dying to give Evey another go, but I'm scared of falling into the same slow-moving trap. Does anyone have any advice or suggestions on how to effectively roleplay a quiet, cerebral character without bringing the action to a grinding halt? I'm even open to suggestions on how to tweak her personality or how to add more complexity and depth. Anything to make her a better, more interesting character and to improve the roleplaying experience overall.
Thank you so much!
Evangeline here was my first character here on Chaos, so she's quite near and dear to my heart. I've always envisioned her as being very quiet and internal, but unfortunately this has a negative impact on my roleplaying. Because I imagine her being such a thinker, I've found that my writing tends to be heavily weighted down by lengthy descriptions of her thoughts, feelings, internal reactions, etc. This means that my posts tend to be slow and do very little to move the actual action along.
I am dying to give Evey another go, but I'm scared of falling into the same slow-moving trap. Does anyone have any advice or suggestions on how to effectively roleplay a quiet, cerebral character without bringing the action to a grinding halt? I'm even open to suggestions on how to tweak her personality or how to add more complexity and depth. Anything to make her a better, more interesting character and to improve the roleplaying experience overall.
Thank you so much!