Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos

Register a free account today to become a member! Once signed in, you'll be able to participate on this site by adding your own topics and posts, as well as connect with other members through your own private inbox!

Approved Lore Naboo Expeditionary Force

Status
Not open for further replies.

Kirk Tektus

Guest
K
naboo_expeditionary_force.png



OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To flesh out the CIS's land combat capabilities and give Naboo a professional fighting force for being the capital of the CIS.
  • Image Credit: Self-made in after effects | X
  • Permissions: Weapons (X), Medical Supplies (X)
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Army Name: The NEF
  • Classification: Expeditionary Force
  • Affiliation: Confederacy of Independent Systems, Naboo and the Chommell Sector
  • Army Symbol: The emblem of Naboo on a purple hex, symbol of the Confederacy
  • Description: A professional army based in Naboo, reporting for active duty with their headquarters on Naboo. They will be sent wherever the CIS require them and will be recalled to the Chommell Sector by orders of the monarch of Naboo
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Headquarters: Naboo
  • Goals: To serve the CIS in whatever missions they are deemed fit to perform, coordinate defense efforts with Chommell Sector security forces and CIS military officials to create a more unified command structure and integrate lesser militaries into the wider CIS command structure, and act as the primary defense for the Chommell Sector.
  • Reputation: Expectations are high for Naboo's new professional expeditionary force, thus when not on active duty the NEF spend most of their days drilling and training to adapt to new strategies designed by CIS military officials. To Naboo this has proven to be a huge investment on their part as it is to be one of their few military organizations with offensive capabilities, So far the NEF have proven themselves to be fairly competent with minor combat assignments taking a few dozen casualties with their initial run and so they have yet to be deployed on a major combat assignment, however hopes are high for the unit.
COMPOSITION INFORMATION
MEMBERS
Aya Lin - Lieutenant

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
When Naboo was made the capital of the CIS, many in the government in Theed saw this as an opportunity to spread their influence and prestige throughout the galaxy. Additionally, the CIS had started dedicating their resources to fortifying their new capital, thus expanding Naboo's capabilities as a galactic center. For the longest time, Naboo didn't have a dedicated military force. Their only military units consisted of the Royal Guard and the Royal Starfighter Corps, barely worth acknowledging who have had more or less of a good reputation of a decent fighting force. The CIS have recruited members of the Royal Armed Forces before but Naboo had little military prowess to speak of and so, CIS officers and Royal Guardsmen worked together to create Naboo's first offensive capable military unit. For months, the joint commission had been picking the best candidates to fit their new outfit. They took recommendations from the Royal Guard and any Naboo resident who was willing to enlist. The training of the expeditionary force wad focused on combat and survival on multiple environments including tundras, swampy marshes, deserts, urban centers, zero gravity, and forests just to name a few. They have been to deployed to train on worlds such as Malastare, Christophsis, Ryloth, Sullust, Dagobah, and Hoth. All of these training exercises proved costly and Naboo was starting to get skeptical of the benefits of this unit.

Debates were held amongst officials in Naboo about the cost of the expeditionary force, Naboo wanted to pull out of the project but it would've lost financial support from the CIS as Naboo had pledged some of its best military personnel to the project, if they were to pull out the CIS would have to find recruits in other worlds which would've provided costly in both funds and time. So there was no choice to continue with the project, yet some still persisted with cancelling the project. And against the nay-sayers within the span of a year, the Naboo Expeditionary Force was established and paraded through the capital of Theed and was officiated into the CIS. The NEF have been deployed on various combat assignments such as rooting out pirate outposts, peacekeeping operations, and combating insurgencies in the frontier space of the unknown regions. With promising results, the NEF are eager to be deployed on a major combat assignment.
 
Last edited by a moderator:

Ylla Caeli'runa

Guest
Y
Kirk Tektus

The Codex is closed until the 7th of January and all subs must be posted in Pre-Codex until that date.
I'll be moving this to Pre-Codex for the time being.
 
Residential Archfey
Kirk Tektus

Looking good for the most part. Just a few things:


  • Affiliation: The Confederacy of Independent Systems, Naboo and the Chommell Sector
Going to need some links for both the Confederacy, Naboo, and the Chommell Sector here.

    • Weapons (X)
      • BAW-77 Tactical Blaster Rifle
      • BAW-56 Blaster Pistol
      • BAW-78 Precision Rifle
      • BCR-X13 Compact Sniper Rifle
      • RWA-M1 Integrated Weapons Scope
    • Medical Supplies (X)
      • RMED-SI5 Stim Injector
      • RMED-BI6 Bacta Injector
      • RMED-SB4 Portable Medpack
So the links you provided here should actually be listed in the 'Permissions' field in the out of character section. Also, if you could link each individual weapon for ease of access, that'd be splendid.

They have been to deployed to train on worlds such as Malastare, Cristophsis, Ryloth, Sullust, Dagobah, and Hoth. All of these training exercises proved costly and Naboo was starting to get skeptical of the benefits of this unit.

If we could get some links to Malastare, Cristophsis, Ryloth, Sullust, Dagobah, and Hoth, that'd be lovely.
 

Kirk Tektus

Guest
K
Kirk Tektus

Looking good for the most part. Just a few things:


Going to need some links for both the Confederacy, Naboo, and the Chommell Sector here.


So the links you provided here should actually be listed in the 'Permissions' field in the out of character section. Also, if you could link each individual weapon for ease of access, that'd be splendid.



If we could get some links to Malastare, Cristophsis, Ryloth, Sullust, Dagobah, and Hoth, that'd be lovely.

Just added the links, hope everything's in order
 
Residential Archfey
Kirk Tektus

Lovely. The added links are golden.



As mentioned before, the link to your marketplace transaction (the 'Weapons (X)' should be listed in the Permissions field quoted below.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To flesh out the CIS's land combat capabilities and give Naboo a professional fighting force for being the capital of the CIS.
  • Image Credit: Self-made in after effects | X
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A

Other than that, this is good to go.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom