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Approved Starship MTS-19 Pulsar

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Gib

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: Create a Fighter for a new ship line.
Image Source: https://www.artstation.com/captflushgarden
Canon Link: N/A
Restricted Missions: N/A
Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: MandalTech
Model: MTS-19 “Pulsar”
Affiliation: Open Market
Production: Minor
Material: Durplast (outer hull), durasteel (inner hull), Transparisteel,, Eopie hide seats, Armorweave crash harnesses.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Starfighter
Length: 6 meters
Width: 6 meters
Height: 18 meters
Armament: High
2 Triple Laser Cannon Turrets (side mounted 360 rotation)
2 Concussion Missile Launchers (6 missiles each, forward mounted)
1 Proton/Ion bomb bay (10 bombs)
Defenses: High
Squadron Count: Very Low: 6
Maneuverability Rating: Low
Speed Rating: Average
Hyperdrive Class: Average: 3
STANDARD FEATURES

Standard Communications Array
Standard Deflector Shield Generator
Standard Hyperdrive
Standard Ion Engines
Standard Life Support Systems
Advanced Navigational Systems
Standard Repulsorlift Engines
Standard Sensor Array
Military Grade Targeting Systems
Can Enter Atmosphere and Land
Astromech Droid port (MandalTech Astromech Standard)

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Crew: 1 pilot, 1 gunner, 1 astromech
Can carry 0 passengers and 50kg miscellaneous cargo.

Strengths:
Versatile weapons systems
Durable Hull

Weaknesses:
Less maneuverable than standard
Can not use Cannons/missles and Bombs simultaneously
High energy output makes targeting the ship easier
Shields drain faster when using Cannons

Description:
The Pulsar was designed as part of a new ship line for sale a distribution to military, paramilitary, and private agencies. The fighter was designed with versatility in mind and the ability to act in a capacity similar to ancient Y-wings.
 

Raiz

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[member="Gib"]

Instead of having empty fields, put 'N/A'.



Gib said:
Affiliation: Open Market, ORC, Iktotch
Hyperlinke the appropriate ones, ORC to the faction and Iktotch to what or who that is.



Gib said:
Production: Major
Do you mean 'Mass Produced' or 'Minor'?

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You completely missed over the strengths and weaknesses portion which can be found in the format link here (under Starfighter).
 

Gib

Just under the upper hand.
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[member="Raiz Australis"]

Edited points one and two. Not sure what you mean about strengths and weaknesses. They are immediately after advanced systems. Was there a specific item wrong with the strengths and weaknesses I should fix?
 

Raiz

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[member="Gib"]



Gib said:
Canon Link: Restricted Missions: Primary Source:
Put 'N/A' after these, instead of leaving them blank.



Gib said:
Low Squadron Count
This isn't really a weakness.

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You are going to need to put in a couple of weaknesses that can be exploited in a PvP situation as to balance out the submission.
 

Raiz

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Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

[member="Jamie Pyne"], [member="Lily Kuhn"], [member="Zef Halo"]
 
Gib said:
Less maneuverable than standard
Moderate is a step above Average, (your rating is Moderate for this). I think the rating you might be looking for, if this is the weakness you intend on using, is Low (which is one step below Average). Average being standard.
 
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