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Mortuum

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Name: Mortuum.

Region: Unknown.

System: Immortal System.

Suns: One.

Orbital Position: Habitable.

System Features: A large asteroid belt, simply known as "The Belt."

Rotational Period: 24 hours.

Orbital Period: 464.

Class: Terrestrial.


Atmosphere: Type I.

Climate: Incredibly warm and controlled as most of the planet is a large city.

Gravity: Standard.

Primary Terrain: Mainly a ridiculously large city, similar to Coruscant. However, on the outskirts one could find nothing but a volcanic wasteland.

Native Species: None, it was always a complete wasteland.

Immigrated Species: Mainly Human.

Primary Languages: Galactic standard.

Government: The government has been overthrown. It is simply anarchy.

Population: 9.5 billion.

Demonym: Mortuvians.

Major Imports: Nothing. It is an ungoverned wasteland.

Major Exports: Nothing. Again, it is completely ungoverned.



Affiliation: None.

Major Locations: Immortum City. An incredibly large city, similar to the size of Coruscant. It takes up about 90% of the planet.



Culture: There is practically no culture.
Technology: The same as any other planet, really. Anything someone on Coruscant would have, they have here.
History: The planet was discovered by a Mon Calamari explorer who went by the name "Mortuum Sake. Over an incredible period of time, a large, mega-city was built, spanning all over the planet. Of course, this took hundreds of years to complete. Around that time, the planet began producing weapons and booze. With a simple, Federal Republic system, the planet was capable of surviving.

However, at an unknown period in time, a deadly virus known as the "Rabidus Virus." The virus essentially shut down the body, the heart no longer beating, the only thing keeping them alive is the brain. Those infected were unable to communicate and craved flesh. One who was bitten would be infected by the Rabidus Virus.

Unable to stop the virus, the government simply stopped existing. The survivors were left hungry and nearly defenseless, hardly able to defend themselves from the virus. Most government officials evacuated the planet as the virus began to spread, abandoning their citizens to die in the aftermath.


Notable PCs: None yet.
Intent: To create a planet for faction and character development.
 

Rusty

Purveyor of Fine Weaponry
Hi, I'll be your friendly neighborhood Codex judge for this endeavor.

There are a few things that need to be addressed.

Firstly: You'll need to be more specific on the region. We need to know where this thing is going to go on the map.

Also, how does a city of this size spring up on a planet with no notable resources and nothing but a volcanic wasteland for terrain? Cities don't just pop up out of nowhere. That will need to be addressed in the history section. Was it at a convenient point on a hyperspace lane? Was it home to a particular resource that warranted development on this scale? How you do it is up to you, but it'll need to be included in the history section.

There are also two other bits of Chaos canon that need to be covered in the history section as well: The Netherworld events and the Gulag Plague. Both of those events affected the entire galaxy, and will need to be included.

Once you've got that finished, let me know and we'll move on. Feel free to post here or shoot me a PM if you have any questions.

Thanks much.

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Notice: a deadline of January 10th will be imposed on all current standing Codex subs for the official Codex reopening. All subs must be completed to the point of pending secondary approval by then or risk denial/archival.

You have 14 days before the deadline. That's two weeks away. Use your time wisely.
 
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