Approved Starship MM-005 freighter / fighter carrier

[Kami Meran]

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Affiliation: oppen market
Manufacturer: Meran Mechanics
http://starwarsrp.ne...eran-mechanics/
Model: MM-005
Modularity: yes the MM-005 is intended to be high adaptable.
Production:, Mass-Produced.
Material: alusteel and tungstoid
Classification: Corvette

Length: 125

Width: 24.6 meters

Height: 18.5 meters

Armament: 5

• One heavy Dual-Turbolaser Turret
• Eight Autoblasters (retractable)
• ​Two Proton Missile Launchers (Ten missiles per tube)

Defenses:
12

• Shields
• Navigation Dish
• Comm Array
• Sensor Suite
• Smuggler Holds
• False Telesponder (x2)

Hangar:
na can carry 4 on top and bottom of it's hull
Special Features: the ship features 4 airlocks that match the MM4's belly boarding doors allowing up to 4 ships to dock with it and "Hitch a ride. "
its cabin is Modular and can be detached as a life pod.
​the cabin only has a twin TIE engine and little to no weapons generically. although these can be added

Maneuverability Rating: 7
Speed Rating: 7
Hyperdrive Class: 1

Strengths: highly durable
Weaknesses: limited armaments. life pod is unarmed
Description:
Intent: to create a combat freighter and fighter drop ship with fighters as it's primary defense.
this can be easily used as a pirate ship.
Who Can Use This: limited
Primary Source:

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Kami Meran"]

Alright, I get what you're going with here, but it's gonna need a little bit of work. First off there is a discrepancy with lengths here. The MM4 is 30 meters long and with four that's 120m of Fighter on a 100m Corvette. You can either increase the length of the corvette to compensate, or say that the fighters are carried on the top and bottom of the corvette.

Please provide a Defense Rating. I think around a 12 would be appropriate.

3 Speed and 5 Maneuverability is simply too much. 7 or 8 is more appropriate for this size of ship.

You need a description that covers some of the more unusual items you've mentioned for this ship.

• Modified Shields
• Modified Navigation
• Dish Modified Comm Array
• Modified Sensor Suite
• Smuggler Holds
• False Telesponder (x2)

How have they been modified? What makes them different (better/worse/etc.)? What is a False Telesponder and what does it do? So on and so forth. This doesn't need to be very long, but right now I know nothing about the special features of this ship. Appropriate links to approved tech or the wookie would be fine too.

Also the link to Meran Mechanics redirects to the main SWPR page. Please fix it.

 

[Kami Meran]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"]
edited that better?

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

 

[Raziel]

<p>Approved.</p>