Mjelow there

[Corvus Raaf]

[member="Ithrac"]

Firstly there are few, if any rules, in character creation. And I presume you mean zreame Ithrac Zeibitha.

So...taking a look...anything I add would be minor as nothing is wrong. But since you asked, I'd ask if it's a he or a she as you seem to change gender as you go through. And I noticed you've omitted an age. Neither are exactly cardinal sins.

Otherwise I'd be pointing out stuff for the sake of it.

Of course people would challenge this or that but overall? It's good.

 

[Ithrac]

Well my character is a female and the reason I omitted the age is mostly because I have no clue when her race is considered an adult and I'm waiting for a reply on that from the author of the race.

[member="Corvus Raaf"] Thanks for looking it over for me CX

 

[Jack Sparrow]

Welcome!

 

[Ithrac]

Thanks

 

[Val Artis]

Welcome to Chaos! Got any questions just ask and remember have fun.
PS: if you ever wanna thread just PM me and we can figure something out.

[member="Ithrac"]