Approved Location Meran Mechanics Lots

[Kami Meran]

Name: Meran Mechanics stores

Image Source: https://www.cgtrader.com/3d-models/exterior/sci-fi/scifi-base-pack-01

Classification: Store front

Location: Located on several Mandalorian worlds as part to a semi franchise

1 http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mygeeto
2 http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Concord_Dawn
3 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coruscant
4 http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lok

Affiliation: Meran Mechanics
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91265-meran-mechanics/


Description: The stores are intended as small Durasteel pods dropped and set up by ships to sell Meran Mechanics stock.
Admittedly they appear little more than used Vehicle lots run by young Mandalorians.
each store is layered in an Alusteel and capable of being shut down into a small fortress.
the shops have a small mechanics garage as all Meran's are combat Mechanics and Engineers .
up stares there is a small but roomy yet pretty spartan home for the 3 Mando's the floor level is a small office and armory.
1 the

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the mechanics bay is typically open air and leads to the lot offering repairs and custon jobs to locals and customers.
the loving quarters

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the quarters offer 4 small sleeping areas and a fairly decent communal area

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the communal area is set up to entertain customers and visitors as well as the crew.
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the lot offers 2 refueling stations and a Gud Fud portable diner


History: Technically recent developments.
due to Meran Mechanics isolation and the difficulty in accessing it's space the Company decided to set up 5 store fronts to aid in selling and advertising their wares.
Each store is maned by 3 Clan members and at least one KC-33

Intent: To set up small stores to a few locations for development threads and locations for item transactions ect plus role play potential.

Links:
Art
http://magazine.artstation.com/2015/07/10-applying-concept-art-job/
http://www.zf3d.com/News.asp?id=13754
https://www.ilspace.com/2016/life-on-mars.html/%E5%8D%95%E4%BA%BA%E5%8D%A7%E5%AE%A4
items
Gud Fud portable diner

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91177-kc-33-barricade-droid/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91265-meran-mechanics/

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Under review.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Hey, I'll be working with you on this submission. First I'd like to take a moment to go over some grammatical mistakes. These specific examples aside, please go over your submission once more with attention to proper use of capital letters.

Location: Located on several Mandalorian worlds as part if a semi franchise

Should be "of".

due to Meran Mechanics isolation and the difficulty in accessing it's space the Company decided to nfet up 5 store fronts to aid in selling and advertising there wears.

Should be "its space", "their wares". Please correct "nfet", I'm not sure what you mean here.

each store is maned by 3 Clan members

Should be "manned".

intended as small durasteel pods dropped and set up bt ships to sell Meran Mechanics stock

Please correct.

Affiliation: meran mechanics

Link doesn't work. Please update.

Links: na

You put up N/A here, but then go on to provide two links. The "na" can be safely removed.

Please expand upon this submission's description. I'd like to see it reach a full paragraph. What does the shop look like inside? How big is it? What can someone visiting it expect to see? Right now I don't really get a sense of that. This would greatly help in making it a role playable location.

Thanks

 

[Kami Meran]

Sorry i'm Very dyslexic [member="Darth Pyrrhus"]
i think i got it all.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Kami Meran"]

No problem. Any feedback on grammar is not intended as punishment, but rather to help you make the submission look better.

The link under affiliation still doesn't work.

I don't see any changes to the description. Tag me when you've included what was asked for in my previous post.

Please expand upon this submission's description. I'd like to see it reach a full paragraph. What does the shop look like inside? How big is it? What can someone visiting it expect to see? Right now I don't really get a sense of that. This would greatly help in making it a role playable location.

Thanks

 

[Kami Meran]

[member="Darth Pyrrhus"] edited that any better? sorry.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Kami Meran"]

Much better. Now there are only two more things I'll ask of you and this should be set to go.

I will need to see an image source for the three new images provided.

Affiliation: meran mechanics

This link still doesn't work, and simply directs you to the front page. Replace with the following: Meran Mechanics[/url ]

 

[Kami Meran]

@Darth Prryhus
edited

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Approved, pending secondary.

[member="Silencia"]

 

[Quietus]

Reminds me of the modular buildings from the C&C games.

Approved