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Approved Planet Marna

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Name:
Marna

Region:
Expansion

System:
Marna

Sun:
One; G-Type star

Orbital position:
Habitable zone

Moons:
Two; Horeen (Inhabitable) and Moogroka (Inhabitable)

System features:
Both moons are unnaturally cold and icy, deep running ore mines and gem mines scattered amongst both (Ores: coal and gold) (Gems: sapphires and rubies)

Coordinates:
http://i.imgur.com/5otQu5d.png

Rotational period:
Thirty-eight hours is one full day.

Orbital period:
Three hundred and eighty days is one full year

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Class:
Terrestrial

Diameter:
11, 368 kilometers

Atmosphere:
Type 1

Climate:
Due to the planet orbiting a dwarf star, it is a naturally colder world.

Gravity:
Standard gravity.

Primary terrain:
Mostly made up of long out stretches of plains which are all icey fields of grass, with some canyons and a couple large forests

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Native species:
Marnian, which is simply another race of human’s which developed over the years and have nothing special or different from humans.

Immigrated species:
Humans

Primary languages:
Marnian Basic, which is a combination of many human languages and Galactic Standard Basic.

Government:
Marnian Monarch, a king or queen with a council of five lords or ladies, the council of three then vote upon a new king or queen and the council themselves may not be nominated.

Population:
One hundred and thirty-seven thousand, five hundred and eighty-nine all up. Seventy-three percent of the population are Marnian and nineteen percent are human, the remaining eight percent are made up of a mixture of many other races.

Demonym:
Marnan

Major imports:
Foods of all kinds, electrical goods and weaponry

Major exports:
Raw ore, precious gems and fighters

Affiliation:
One Sith

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Major locations:
The magnificent metallic capital of Mar, preaches the most beautiful and heavily dense city of the entire planet. Due to its construction, being almost entirely out of metallic material, the city is easily able to be changed throughout and fixed to the king or queens desire, as well as controllable climate within the city itself. The main attractions within the capital are the palace of Mar; a lovely building that hosts the king and the council, the temple of Mar; which consists of the learning of the Sith, the night life of Mar; has quite a few cantinas, and the trade-center of Mar; where you can pick up anything you desire at a low cost.

The blue forest of Mar, is just as it sounds but an unusual sight to behold. Everything within the forest itself is a shade of blue, no other colour inhabits the forest that is natural and plants that have turned it as their home, begin changing pigments. Within the forest lays a hiking path for those who wish for the daily exercise or simply a place to walk, on said walk it would not be unusual to come across animals crossing the path; the animals are mammals with thick coats to protect them from the cold and like the forest itself have a blue tint to the fur but not as distinguished as the plant-life.

The ice canyons of Mar, simply stunning geographical sites that show the corrosive nature of large bodies of water turned to ice. They encompass only a small portion of the planet itself, but have a deep open mouth that stretches for a couple miles each. The sides are jagged edges with smooth walls running down the sides, the danger would be to slip in as the entirety has a thick layer of ice covering which gives it a shimmering glow whilst in the day time.

Culture:
Due to the Marnian culture derives from the Human’s, it takes on a mixture of human like cultures. For one, they believe in equality of the sexes but ironically, are casually racist towards those that aren’t Marnian or Human. The ranking structure within their culture would have to be with respect, the leaders of towns are chosen to lead and the rest choose to follow due to respect, similarly with the government system in place, the king or queen are usually the most respected person and have earned the respect through years of deeds towards the people and the lords and ladies of the council nominate those that they see as being respected by all.

The main food diet consists of meat, vegetarianism (as well as veganism) is not exactly looked highly upon but not spat upon, as the meat is seen as a fulfilling meal to almost every person upon the planet. Keeping hydrated is a common knowledge deal, whereas alcohol isn't illegal but only seen as something to be drank in a celebration or during special events, those who drink over board aren't seen as below another but more someone that should be pitied.

Believing in peace and yet assisting the One Sith can seem as a contradiction but being prideful of one's history is something to never turn there back on. Festivals of the Sith have also translated onto Marna, such as the celebration of the discovery of Marna and the kings or queens birthday.

Technology:
Galactic Standard throughout the planet

History:
For thousands of years the planet of Marna has been a hotspot for Humans to take up residency, simply to have a place to stay and not be sweeped under the radar of anything that remotely considered itself a member of a faction of war. Unfortunately due to its location, it was seen as an easy sight for the One Sith to take over and eventually, they sent a Sith lord to survey the land.

The Sith lord went to planet Marna and reported of several tribe like civilizations that have set up on the planet, what was odd to the Sith was the race of the tribes were all Human, or at least near enough to human. This striked the higher ups of the One Sith as nothing more than a coencidence and ordered the lord to take over the planet in their name.

It didn't take much to either convince, or force, the leaders of each group to fall under the lord and from there the beginings of the government of Marna began. Unfortunately soon after there was an outbreak of the Gulag Plague. Fortunately enough their planet seemed to be fine, that was until Coruscant became infected and from there, it didn't take long to get to here.

For years many people succumb to the plague, making the population swindle through various means but over the years the lord heald through and finally, after years of hard work did the people of Marna pull through, seeing the lord as someone of great importance and dubbing him the first king of marna.

Years later, a lost Ex-Jedi knight made his way onto the planet. His odd ways confused the locals, and scared the children, after causing some trouble the king demanded to see him right away but moments after meeting him, did the king demand the One Sith to send in another lord to handle the boy.

Darth Rex was the man they sent, coming to the planet as if a god from heaven to handle a misbehaviour. Unfortunately to the king's wishes, did Darth Rex instead take young Quintin under his wing and train him in the ways of the dark side. For many years did Quintin return to the planet, only to the displeasure of the king and the excitement of the locals.

Roughly on the eve of twelfth Taungsday, 844 ABY did billions of people get reported of disappearing around the world and ultimately upon the planet in a near instant, word spread like wild fire and soon did the panic of the people of Marna. Upon hearing the news, Quintin now dubbed Darth Carolus returned to the planet.

Upon hearing the news of Carolus's return to the planet, the people were excited and in a daze of depression due to their king being one that disappeared overnight. It took him months, but Carolus managed to reactify the disbalance within the government system and set up the council of lords and ladies, the planet was on the right track again.

The people needed a king, the lords and ladies of the council voted and Darth Carolus was dubbed the second king of Marna, the Justicar of Mar.

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Notable player characters:
Quintin//Darth Carolus and Egil, for now.

Intent:
A planet that Carolus has been using as his home since his change to the One Sith, a place where Carolus has raised in stature becoming nominated for King and a planet that can be used for the One Sith.
 
Darth Carolus said:
Rotational period: Thirty-eight hours is one full day. Thirteen hours of sunlight and twenty-five hours of moonlight
Rotational period's don't work like that. You're suggesting than the amount of sunlight the surface gets is less on one half than it is the other or that the world itself slows down somehow during its rotational period. The difference between day-and-night cannot possibly be that different without an extraordinary phenomena such as the world being lopsided.



Darth Carolus said:
Climate: Due to the rotational period and the sun, the planet is cold and harsh, be it frequent snowing and when the sun shows itself, hail but not at the constant. The constant weather is forever in a winter like state.

Climate change is affected by the orbital period, not the rotational period. I could see this being a naturally colder world though because it's orbiting a dwarf star, though.



Darth Carolus said:
Gravity: A near replica of Earth’s gravity pull
Could you please change this to 'Standard' to avoid any confusion.



Darth Carolus said:
Major locations: The capital of Mar, the icey canyons and the bright blue forest.
I'm going to need you to expand on these locations. Please list all of them and give a fair description to each, the more important it is the more description I expect. So for example, I'll expect more than a few sentences describing the capital--assuming it's important.



Darth Carolus said:
Culture: Due to the Marnian culture derives from the Human’s, it takes on a mixture of human like cultures. For one, they believe in equality of the sexes but ironically, are casually racist towards those that aren’t Marnian or Human. The ranking structure within their culture would have to be with respect, the leaders of towns are chosen to lead and the rest choose to follow due to respect, similarly with the government system in place, the king or queen are usually the most respected person and have earned the respect through years of deeds towards the people and the lords and ladies of the council nominate those that they see as being respected by all.
This just focuses on their social ladder. I'd like you to expand on the culture. Are they peaceful or warlike? Do they hold festivities or shun such recreation? What kind of traditions do they have? How do they live their day-to-day lives?



Darth Carolus said:
History: For thousands of years the planet has been visited by human settlers, the planet ended up turning into a hotspot for those who wished to live away from the rest of the world and still be near it. Unfortunately having a bunch of settlers, all of which believed in different creeds and codes, didn’t bode well and the One Sith saw an opportunity to put their finger in. A human, leading an army, landed upon the planet and forcefully took control of the planet, from there there was a pact between the planet and the Emperor. The culture of the planet grew and from subjecated citizens, did they turn into men and women of Marna, they became free and their chains were broken. For years have the government worked well and relative peace has been upon the planet. There was a time that a man sought out refuge on the planet, many could sense the light within him though he wasn’t ousted from the planet and instead was introduced to his future master there. Years passed, the one who sought refuge had returned under a new name, Darth Carolus and many saw him as a respected lord, it didn't take long for the council of lords and ladies to see this and nominate him King of Marna.
You need to mention h the world was affected by the Gulag Plague and 400 Year Darkness. As well the recent Netherworld event, lots of people disappeared. Please mention these events in the history and how it affected the world.

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I will be making edits soon, though would it be possible that the format is edited to include the part of the two events needing to be in the history.

Due to my nonexistent knowledge of the two events, allow me time to look into both as I was unaware of their existence.
 
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