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Malus (Malic's Sithspawn Body)

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Image: (For the purpose of RPing, I want this to remain a secret, but if a judge needs to see it, I can gladly PM what Malic looks like)

Name: Malus

Designation: Sentient

Homeworld: Arkania

Language: Galactic Basic Standard

Average height of adults: 2 meters

Skin color: Scrabbled gray

Hair color: None

Breathes: Type I

Strengths:

  • Shadowy body - While this may not seem like a strength, Malic covets this above all else, for nobody is able to see inside the hooded robe of what he actually looks like. Even the use of the Force is unable to perceive his true form. Once again, this offers no power or any kind of strength in battle, but he believes this adds fear that when someone looks at him, all they see is darkness. As he's a Sithspawn, this genetic trait alongside the Dark Side allows for this. However, he's able to show others what he truly looks likes underneath if he wishes.
  • Agile body - His body allows for quick and fluid movements in battle, especially in terms of lightsaber tactics. This isn't superhuman speed, but just that he's able to move quickly and adeptly in battle due to his body.

Weaknesses:
  • Extremely susceptible to light based attacks: While all darksiders are susceptible to powers that use the Light Side of the Force in battle, a Malus is extremely vulnerable to such attacks, seeing it damages the body even more due to the darkness inherent in it, which makes it a weakness. The darkness refers to the fact the Malus is a Sithspawn and was partly created from the Dark Side. A group of Jedi or even a strong Jedi who managed to keep directing such powers on Malic would be able to destroy him.
  • Unable to reproduce: Due to the fact that Malic's species is one of a kind, there is no way to naturally recreate another one except through Sith alchemy and genetic engineering. Even with this, due to the fact that Arkanian scientists worked with the original body under the request of Mak Manto, due to Malic's control, there's a high possibility no other body can be created.
  • Arrogance - A combination of the fact the Malus is a Sithspawn and of Malic himself. This arrogance is set in the fact that Malic believes he's one of the greatest Sith of all time, someone who can't be stopped, and many times in the past, this has been his downfall in completing his plans, especially with those he considers inferior. He has lost to non-Force users due to the fact he believes they aren't worth his time.
Distinctions:
  • Unseeable body
  • Unabated malevolence
Average Lifespan: Undetermined (This doesn't mean the specie's immortal. More or less, the average life span will be around a Human's. It could be a little bit more or little bit less, but the lifespan is set around 120 standard years, but seeing that it's a Sithspawn, that it's completely new, there's no definite guarantee, but this doesn't mean it can live hundreds of years).

Races: None

Estimated Population: Only being of its kind

Diet: Human diet

Communication: Speech

Culture: Seeing that he's the only one of his kind, there's really not a general culture for this species, but if one had to be described for his person, it's one of pure evil and malevolence. There's no room for leisure, for enjoying oneself. Every waking minute is set to completing his plans. That doesn't mean he doesn't eat or sleep, but his culture is one that sets above all else to finish the plans he has. Also, there's a belief in furthering science. This may sound strange coming from a being of the Force, but science and the Force aren't ad odds with each other, and knowing how the two work with each other, with what can be learned in the future, is something that the Malus would want. Above all else, violence, hatred and humiliation is something that the Malus strives for. Malic cares for no one, and this cultural trait is something that's not only done whenever he feels like, it's inherent in how he treats everybody, be it temporary ally or foe.

Technology level: None at a societal level, since Malic is the only one of his kind, but Malic has an intermediate knowledge of technology and science. He's able to preform experiments, such as creating his body and even understands the aspect of cloning and what goes behind the process, however, he's unable to preform cloning since he doesn't have the technology.

General behavior: Manipulation and deceit is to be expected at any cost. Malic also has no interest in anything but his own plan for the most part. However, if it doesn't interrupt with his missions, he has been known to cause destruction and terror just because he can, taking a deep pleasure in such a thing.

History: Dev Thread

Notable Player-Characters: Malic

Intent: This will be a long section to describe the intent of this species for this character, for he has a long history, and this will include both IC and OOC discussion. The original intent for this character, which still is the same as now, was to create a Sith who was more in line to what we saw with Palpatine. Sith player characters who fell in love, who had children, who could be seen as good in a certain sense was something I wanted to not have. I wanted a Sith who was seen as pure evil, as something unholy in every sense, a being who was hated by everyone, be it Jedi or Sith, Force user or non-Force user, ally or enemy. Even if someone was working with Malic for their own purposes, they still would have this hatred of him.

Since Malic was created on a website where there were few rules on character creation, he was RPed as a Dark Spirit. However, since Force spirits aren't allowed on the site, in the sense that a character can't be immortal or able to die from age, I was limited with what Malic could do, other than residing in someone's mind. So, the idea came to have a new species be constructed for him, one he could use in the Galaxy, and that, IC at least, would give him more advantages than being a spirit does.

This is something he would want, because being a Dark Spirit has its limitations, and a body of his own, a new species, would allow him to do more than what he originally could do.

Also, seeing he was a Sith Master at TGC, but is getting a new body here, the aim here is that he will be RPed again as a Sith apprentice. Despite the fact of his knowledge, he will have to understand how his new body works, of how he will adeptly use the Force, and so he will have to be trained. This doesn't mean that since he knows of destructive powers, he will be able to use them once he becomes a Knight. This is like Anakin Skywalker. Anakin may have had the highest midichlorian count of all Jedi, but that didn't mean when he became a Jedi Knight, he was able to use every power and lightsaber technique. In time, from apprentice to knight to Master, he will eventually come to harness something greater, but this will be in the confines of the rules.
 
Malic said:
Image: (For the purpose of RPing, I want this to remain a secret, but if a judge needs to see it, I can gladly PM what Malic looks like)
This submission is for OOC purposes. Only those who have IC reason to know a character's appearance should do so. If someone says they know your character's look without having a legitimate reason to, you can speak with them yourself, speak with an Admin or RPJ, or report the post. For this reason, I would ask that if you do have a picture, please add it here with a link.



Malic said:
Breathes: Oxygen
This should be one of the five types of atmospheres in Star Wars. In this case, Type 1.



Malic said:
Thousands of years old
The body is a thousand years old, or the character is?



Malic said:
Shadowy body - While this may not seem like a strength, Malic covets this above all else, for nobody is able to see inside the hooded robe of what he actually looks like. Even the use of the Force is unable to perceive his true form. Once again, this offers no power or any kind of strength in battle, but he believes this adds fear that when someone looks at him, all they see is darkness. As he's a Sithspawn, this genetic trait alongside the Dark Side allows for this. However, he's able to show others what he truly looks likes underneath if he wishes.
Not only am I not sure what to make of this, it sounds like it would require a Dev Thread of its own. What you have here is flat out invisibility.



Malic said:
Arrogance - A combination of the fact the Malus is a Sithspawn and of Malic himself. This arrogance is set in the fact that Malic believes he's one of the greatest Sith of all time, someone who can't be stopped, and many times in the past, this has been his downfall in completing his plans, especially with those he considers inferior. He has lost to non-Force users due to the fact he believes they aren't worth his time.
This isn't a weakness relating to the body, this is a weakness relating to a character. You are not submitting a character, you are submitting a species.



Malic said:
Culture: Seeing that he's the only one of his kind, there's really not a general culture for this species, but if one had to be described for his person, it's one of pure evil and malevolence. There's no room for leisure, for enjoying oneself. Every waking minute is set to completing his plans. That doesn't mean he doesn't eat or sleep, but his culture is one that sets above all else to finish the plans he has. Also, there's a belief in furthering science. This may sound strange coming from a being of the Force, but science and the Force aren't ad odds with each other, and knowing how the two work with each other, with what can be learned in the future, is something that the Malus would want. Above all else, violence, hatred and humiliation is something that the Malus strives for. Malic cares for no one, and this cultural trait is something that's not only done whenever he feels like, it's inherent in how he treats everybody, be it temporary ally or foe. Technology level: None at a societal level, since Malic is the only one of his kind, but Malic has an intermediate knowledge of technology and science. He's able to preform experiments, such as creating his body and even understands the aspect of cloning and what goes behind the process, however, he's unable to preform cloning since he doesn't have the technology. General behavior: Manipulation and deceit is to be expected at any cost. Malic also has no interest in anything but his own plan for the most part. However, if it doesn't interrupt with his missions, he has been known to cause destruction and terror just because he can, taking a deep pleasure in such a thing.
Once again, this is a species submission. Considering there is only one of this species, what kind of genetic culture/behaviors does it have? This is a Sithspawn, so the character is probably heavily influences by the Dark Side.



Malic said:
History: Dev Thread
The thread you have listed isn't enough for a Sithspawn. I'm going to ask for another thread of at least 20 posts of good quality. The thread should address the creation of the species.
 
Enoch Zambrano said:
The body is a thousand years old, or the character is?
The character, but since this is about the body, I'll edit that one out.

Enoch Zambrano said:
Not only am I not sure what to make of this, it sounds like it would require a Dev Thread of its own. What you have here is flat out invisibility.
Anyone is able to see Malic, just as you would see another person, just not within the hood. This is not a power or strength where Malic could be invisible and attack someone without seeing them. This relates to the darkness that is inherent in the body and that it wraps around him.

As for the other comments, I'll continue the dev thread.
 
Malic said:
Anyone is able to see Malic, just as you would see another person, just not within the hood. This is not a power or strength where Malic could be invisible and attack someone without seeing them. This relates to the darkness that is inherent in the body and that it wraps around him.
In that case, it would seem you would need a Factory submission for the hood. While I understand that you want the species to be unseen under hoods, the easiest way to do that would just have a really, really deep hood. If you want literal shadows, that's going to require more.
 
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