Via Dolorosa
Amans In Tenebris
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Major Faction Application: Covenant of the Black Rose
- Thread starter Via Dolorosa
- Start date
The Lion King
[member="Darth Venefica"]
Letting you know I'm checking out your application now. Full review will come soon.
Letting you know I'm checking out your application now. Full review will come soon.
The Lion King
[member="Darth Venefica"]
First thing that springs to mind is I find your description lacking.
All it says is you're primarily a Sith faction with different beliefs than those of the One Sith, but it doesn't tell you exactly what those beliefs are. Do you have a code? How is it different from the traditional Sith code?
You've also neglected to mention how the faction got started. What's your history, who founded it and why? Is there bad blood between you and the One Sith?
First thing that springs to mind is I find your description lacking.
All it says is you're primarily a Sith faction with different beliefs than those of the One Sith, but it doesn't tell you exactly what those beliefs are. Do you have a code? How is it different from the traditional Sith code?
You've also neglected to mention how the faction got started. What's your history, who founded it and why? Is there bad blood between you and the One Sith?
Maybe so, but you're not telling us what those options are.Darth Venefica said:
Via Dolorosa
Amans In Tenebris
[member="Thurion Heavenshield"]
Updated the description....explained the difference between the OS and the BR as well while explaining the history of the BR and the issues between the OS and BR.. Fixed The Pitch also.
Updated the description....explained the difference between the OS and the BR as well while explaining the history of the BR and the issues between the OS and BR.. Fixed The Pitch also.
Sanya Val Lerium
Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
[member="Thurion Heavenshield"]
Sorry to tag you but not sure if you have forgotten about this.
Sorry to tag you but not sure if you have forgotten about this.
The Lion King
[member="Darth Venefica"]
Unless anything's changed from last time I checked in on this (sorry for the long wait), I see no reason to reject your application.
Major faction application approved.
Keep up the activity and enjoy yourselves!
Go ahead and post in the map update thread. Make sure to list your starting planets.
Unless anything's changed from last time I checked in on this (sorry for the long wait), I see no reason to reject your application.
Major faction application approved.
Keep up the activity and enjoy yourselves!
Go ahead and post in the map update thread. Make sure to list your starting planets.