OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
- Planet Name: Lowrin IV
- Demonym: Lowrini
- Region: Far Outer Rim
- System Name: Lowrin
- System Features: Rotation around a single sun causing yearly seasons, the only other planets surrounding the same sun are uninhabited
- Location: The only Red hex that touches the very left edge of the Galaxy Map.
- Major Imports: None (No outside contact except for Darth Retrius)
- Major Exports: None
- Unexploited Resources: Durasteel, Phrik, possibly Kyber
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
- Gravity: Standard
- Climate: Temperate
- Primary Terrain: Grasslands with some mountains
- Atmosphere: Type I
LOCATION INFORMATION
- Capital City: Ronalin
- Planetary Features: Interconnected cities, no advanced technologies, mix of urban and rural across the entire planet
- Major Locations: Ronalin and other surrounding cities are the most heavily populated areas, with other similar areas across the planet. There are also some large areas of the planet dedicated to strictly farmland. These two area types are scattered throughout the planet, with a nice Interconnected mix that makes a popular city or isolated farmland available to anyone.
- Force Nexus Details: None, the planet has no specific connection to either side of the Force, and aside from Darth Retrius, their knowledge of the Force is little-to-none. There is, therefore, no Nexus.
POPULATION
- Native Species: Humans
- Immigrated Species: None
- Population: Heavy in urban areas, moderate in rural areas
- Demographics: Exclusively human, any aliens would be feared because of lack of knowledge
- Primary Languages: The only language is their own (Lowrini) due to lack of outside connections
- Culture: Due to lack of Force connection and knowledge, they have no religion. They live simple, primitive lives. The wealthy lived at the very tops of society, controlling much of the less fortunate's lives. Their massive gladiator ring in Ronalin offered for their entertainment, with the gladiators being the poor who sold themselves into slavery to support themselves and/or their families in the future. Simple, yet beautiful architecture in urban regions, and less impressive but highly practical architecture in rural regions. Jobs for middle and lower-class citizens include building, farming, and trading. Darth Retrius, upon arrival, was thrown into the gladiator ring due to nobody knowing who he was or where he was from. He killed all of the wealthy members of society, and became the sole ruler of the planet. This has made the middle and lower class thrive economically.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
- Government: Darth Retrius is the sole and unopposed leader of the entire planet, basing his operations in a large building next to the ruins of the gladiator ring, which he destroyed.
- Affiliation: Darth Retrius
- Wealth: The planetary wealth is incomparable to other planets due to lack of outside connections. Wealth varies throughout the planet, but variation has gone down exponentially.
- Stability: Very high stability, everybody loves Darth Retrius for aboloshing slavery as a gladiator and evening the planetary wealth. Outside visitors would have to be approved by Darth Retrius, otherwise they will likely be killed,
- Freedom & Oppression: A fair amount of freedom has been given to the people through Darth Retrius, and everybody is happy under his rule. Very positive.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
- Military: No military capabilities whatsoever due to lack of advancements
- Technology: Very little technological advancements have been made, the best technological advancements are plows and carts. Writing has recently been developed to record the history of Darth Retrius.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Previously undiscovered and not settled by outsiders, the native humans have always (inexplicably) been there. Darth Retrius has been the only outside connection, and he has not allowed them to use his technology or travel with him. Any more outside connections from a third party would likely cause planet-wide chaos, especially if they oppose Darth Retrius.
I have a few questions:
- Is this an acceptable entry?
- If it is, should I repost my request for a Custom Planet Addition with this link?
- If not, what do I need to add/change?
- How do I tag somebody?
Thanks for taking the time...It's a solid start, and the concept of Darth Retrius' rule is interesting. That said, the entry still feels a bit bare bones at this stage. To really make it valuable for the community, it would help to expand on key areas like culture, economy, planetary geography, daily life under Darth Retrius, and how his rule shapes society beyond just wealth and stability. The more depth and detail you can provide, the better it will serve as a useful reference or inspiration for others. I'd suggest fleshing it out a bit more before submitting it.
Planets are made for the community to enjoy not just one writer so Darth Retrius can't "own" it under permissions. We don't gate keep planets.
You should also link a few images you like directly then add image credit for those specific images. Linking a Google Search does not suffice, especially, because those links can expire and then it'll just lead to broken information in a week or two.
For things like "Government" we're not asking who leads it but the
type of Government. Is it Authoritarian? Imperial?
When you're ready to resubmit just edit the submission and copy/paste it into the Live Judging area as a
new submission. Don't just post the link.
To tag someone you just put an @ before their username. So @ Srina Talon (with no space) gives you this
Srina Talon
and it auto links.
The thing you want to get away from the most is writing the planet as if it strictly belongs to
Darth Retrius
because custom planets are made for the community to enjoy as a whole. Think of it like a wiki entry. It just needs... More information.
