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Location: Site-02.2

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Name: Site-02.2
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Intent: Testing of the first holographing images.


Classification: Miscellaneous.


Location: A desert planet populated with plants and animals that are dangerous and toxic waste lakes are seen here.


Association: "dumb" this is referring to the planet. No one knows about this place anymore.


Population: 1- William


Defenses: A torn down sound proof room with a window, which is perfect for snipers.


Description: A tall torn-down lab with tiles of granite on the floor, ceiling, and walls that have been untouched and left to erode with high value tech laying in the chambers next to a smaller and wider building used for storage that has a wooden floor and cast steel walls and ceiling with iron and wood boxes stacked sky high untouched.


History: This was originally the test sites for the first makings of holograms, pretty old! The tests were finished and holograms were made for military use, and the building then- the building had no meaning. The owners didn't feel like wrecking the place down so they left it sitting there, and somehow it still stands after a long time.

Links: No links.

Status: Eroding, but will stand for a long time.

Affiliation: New Hope Testing and Chambers (not a company anymore, bankrupt.)
 
[member="William"]

Please don't post in here unless it's in response to a request or question from a Codex Judge, Roleplay Judge, or Admin.

Classification: Overly secret
Classification: (The types of classification are (but not limited to): Generic, Army Base, Naval Station, Miscellaneous. )
Fix that, please.

Affiliation: "that big pile of dump!"
Who owns the place? If someone or an organization then it's affiliated to them, if not then put N/A.

Alright, could you please increase the description to be at least a full paragraph in length? Also, a word of advice: Read through the templates carefully -- there's nothing wrong with having a bit of humor but it'd be bad if someone thought you were trolling the Codex.
 
William said:
Association: "dumb" this is referring to the planet. No one knows about this place anymore.

This isn't a field, please don't change from affiliation to association. Please replace "Association" with the "Affiliation" field and its contents that you've written below:



William said:
Affiliation: New Hope Testing and Chambers (not a company anymore, bankrupt.)



William said:
Status: Eroding, but will stand for a long time.
the 'status' portion can go under description, there's no status field in the template.

Lastly, please expand the description by at least 3-4 full sentences.
 
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It's been 5 days since I asked for edits, due to the lack of actual progress with this submission I will be closing it for archive in 48 hours if you do not respond.
 
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