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Approved Starship Libita-Class Command Ship

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Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
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Affiliation: Outer Rim Coalition
Manufacturer: Rendili Stardrives

Model: Libita-Class Command Ship

Modularity: Limited, Some Weapons mounts are exchangeable for comparable weaponry.

Production: Unique

Material: Ultrachrome Hull, Durasteel and Alutsteel framework, Glasteel Viewports

Classification: Heavy Super Carrier, Command Ship

Length: 3000 Meters
Width: 1152 Meters
Height: 685 Meters

Armament: 4
(400)
  • Spinal Mounted Forward Fix Dual Heavy Long Ranged Mass Driver Cannon Battery (64)
  • Dual Heavy Turreted Turbolaser Cannons x50 (200)
  • Dual Heavy Turreted Ion Cannons x10 (40)
  • Heavy Turbolaser Batteries x10 (80)
  • Missile Launchers x8 (16)
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  • Point Defense Emplacements x180 (180)
  • Flak Cannons x140 (140)
  • laser Cannon Batteries x40 (160)
Defenses: 18
Hangar:
  • Fighter/Bomber Squadrons x12
  • Shuttles/Transports (single units) x3
Special Features:
  • Communications Array
  • Encryption Network
  • Holonet Transceiver
  • Standard Detention Cells
  • Tractor Beams x 2
  • Shield Generator x 2
  • Reinforced Frame
  • Reinforced Ultrachrome Hull
  • Chaf Launchers x100 (anti missile)




Maneuverability: 18
Speed Rating: 17
Hyperdrive Class: 1.5 Main Drive, Class 10 Backup Drive

Strengths:
  • Tough as they come: Made from Ultrachrome, the hull of Sanya Val Lerium's personal carrier is thoroughly prepared to take a pounding. Capable of resisting energy based damage sources better than normal metals, Ultrachrome makes the outer plating of the carrier a tough nut to crack. With Durasteel and Alusteel beams reinforcing the frame throughout the ship
  • More than a handful: Clearly as the ship is definitively a carrier, it carries a large number of fighter squadrons within its hold, providing the large command ship with ample support for itself and an accompanying fleet against enemy threats. Depending on the commander in charge and the ships stockpiled within, they can most certainly be more than a handful for whoever has to combat them.
  • Emp resistant: witwith the use of electromagnetic shielding the ship is immune to Electromagnetic pulses from an outside sources. This was a late designed feature that was apart of the sponsorship deal due to many enemy vessels using pulse weapons.
Weaknesses:
  • Big Boned. . . . .And Proud of it!: A result of anything being coated in Ultrachrome is that it will be heavier than other ships of its class, even if the space within has hollowed room to make way for a hangar. As such ships even slightly smaller than the carrier in question can out maneuver it and possibly outrun it.
  • Close and mid range: The ship was designed in such a away that it dose best an long rage than close to mid encounters. This means the ship is best suited at the back of a fleet playing a support role. While it's defences may hold for a quick skim in close quarters to launch the assault boarding pods the hanger been a long central bay would be the prime target to cause most damage. It also makes it easier for enemy vessels to take advantage of the close quarters to board the singular large hanger.
  • One large hanger: this designs feature is similar to many of the old republic ships. Using just one large bay makes it faster for the pilots to get to the hanger in case of emergency. Although this comes with two problems. During battle ships would be having to constantly enter and leave the hanger bay for restocking or repairs. This would mean if a squadron was about to launch a delay could happen taking priority of those incoming. The single hanger also presents the problem of been a target. Once a transport or star fighter is close enough there is minimal defence to protect the hanger bay from been landed in or even damaged causing the doors to shut locking out any ships still in the battlefield and locking in reinforcements.


Description: Designed for her intimate friend Sanya Val Swift, the Carrier produced under contract by Rendili Stardrive is one that, while perhaps she wasn't completely impressed with and could only wish more time and work could be squeezed into the project, Camellia Swift was satisfied would meet the needs of the former jedi and do justice as a quality product all the same. As such, the ship not only boasts an expansive hangar, but comparable firepower to contend with other ships of its tonnage in a one to one battle while taking the lead in the defense department as the hull was comprised of ultrachrome plating.

With the hull's natural resilience to energy as a base property, in addition to ultrachrome's additional hardiness, the carrier to be placed in the employ of the covenant of the Black Rose as Sanya Val swifts's personal ship is an especially difficult ship to destroy. Its firepower still being able to keep up to par against most other combat vessels of similar tonnage is a simple byproduct of the intense, and expensive, Proton-8 Hypermatter Reactor installed as the heart of the carrier, shining as the pinnacle of Rendili engineering as it provides the same quantity of power as the Kuat I-a2b Solar Ionization Reactor, but at 1/4 the size, allowing for greater space for the hangar and additional frame reinforcement.

Development Thread:
Shiny and new, just like you - ultrachrome 17
Can see myself in the reflection - ship dev 31
A sponsor and a second chance 11
Authorization of the Libita 34
Highway to the danger zone 41

Total posts = 134 posts

Intent: to create a command ship for Sanya Val Swift to use in the mercs legion and the galactic republic.
Who Can Use This: [member="Sanya Val Swift"], [member="Cynthia Garon"], [member="Taneas Haring"]
Primary Source:(Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)
 
[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

Good evening! Let's get this show on the road.

Right off the bat, there's a rather glaring concern that needs to be addressed. I can't move forward judging this submission until it's rectified.

This submission is limited production...and is 3,000 meters.

As per the starship rules, a minor faction is permitted unique, PC captained ships up to 1,000 meters maximum.

So, before we go any further, I'm going to give you the opportunity to adjust the vessel as a whole to fit the rules. You can arm it, specialize it, etc. according to a 1,000 meter maximum.

@me when you've made your adjustments.

:)
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
[member="Isley Verd"] I've put in the galactic republic with the addition of mercs legion in there.

Also the ship has never been limited production I think you may have miss read from modularity and production.
 
[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

Adding the Republic affiliation opens up a whole new can of worms.

This vessel is a flagship. It has the same hangar, numerous special features, and has a restricted material hull. As such:

- The flagship's affiliation would need to be Galactic Republic solely.

- A proper flagship development thread of 400 posts minimum, utilizing the flagship prefix.

Alternatively you can:

- Drop the dimensions, armaments, and features to match that of what is permitted for a minor faction. (1,000 meter limit)

@Me when you've decided.
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
[member="Isley Verd"]
A flag ship is a vessel that exceeds 3000m in any of the 3 mesurments

Super Carrier
Link: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Carrier
Variants: Dedicated Carrier, Command Ship, Escort, Heavy Carrier, Planetary Assault Carrier
Average Length: 2000-3000 Meters.

Flagship
Link: http://starwars.wiki...m/wiki/Flagship
Variants: Battlecruiser, Dreadnaught, Super Star Destroyer, Command Ship, Assault Carrier
Average Length: 2000-5000 Meters.

I can assure you thisthis is not in anyway a flag ship. If it was I would have done the development for one (400 posts 7+ writers)

As this is a super carrier and my ship size hits the 3000m mark I've done the correct development for this submission. Ships and stations at or above 2,400 meters will always require a development thread. Minimum: 30 posts, 3 writers.

I don't mean this in any offence or to be rude so if I come off as such then my apologies but use the other judges knowlage like resh and gir as I'm aware they have more experience. So if you are unsure about something please ask them and if still no certain answer that your satisfied with then ask me.
 
[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

You may not consider this to be a flagship, but the plethora of exceptional features, restricted material hull, and dimensions make it a flagship.

As such, you have the options listed above.
 
Sanya Val Swift said:
but use the other judges knowlage like resh and gir as I'm aware they have more experience.
Unnecessary comment, state what you're trying to say but avoid any remarks that discredit the judge you are working with. It might not be intended as a rude remark, but it can be taken as such.

[member="Sanya Val Swift"]
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
[member="Isley Verd"]

I'm not willing to comply making this a flagship because I want to keep it true to it's purpose. So what would you say would be necessary to make this what it is?

Id still like to keep hold of it's Hull and hanger
 
[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

Alright, we'll start with development.

If this was simply a starfighter with ultrachrome plating, seventeen posts would be fine. However, this is three thousand meters of restricted material we're talking about, so I'll be requiring additional development.
  • Minimum: 40 posts
Furthermore, this submission is a massive undertaking. A nation, especially one in the Republic's state, does not simply hand out massive warships on a whim. As such, I will be requiring an additional development thread between yourself and a member of the Republic's leadership. I want them to sign off on sponsoring the creation of a vessel that, from where I'm seeing, will see majority use by the Mercs Legion.
  • Minimum: 10 posts
I'll explicitly list the changes you'll need to the armament and special features once my lunch break rolls around. Only had a few minutes to respond at the moment, unfortunately.
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
[member="Isley Verd"]

the unltra chrome dev needs to add up to 40 or additional 40? If so I'll try have it done over the weekend.

As for the sponsor this would tie in well with something I've got planned due to I'll be doing a thread with Mantic
 
[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

On top of your existing development, you will need an additional 40 posts for the Ultrachrome.

And please note, this is not your (and by extension the Mercs Legion's) personal flagship and is not to be used outside of the needs of the major faction sponsoring its creation. Usage outside of those needs will result in its being flagged.
 
[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

Gonna go ahead and archive this until your development threads are finished.

PM [member="Spencer Varanin"] when they're wrapped up and we can get to making the adjustments.
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
[member="Isley Verd"]

One dev is done the other will be finished up when someone gets home from class. All that is needed is to do the escape part. Three things have been added due to the sponsorship (Hydra, Opal and Em shielding )

Other than those I'll look forward to a long list no doubt
 
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