Leo's Bio

[Leo Vandermolen]

Hey guys, I've been developing Leo pretty well over this past month but I feel like his backstory is a little underdeveloped. If anybody has the time, any suggestions as to how I could expand on his story would be very welcomed.

Thanks in advance ~Leo.

 

[Tanomas Graf]

Just a suggestion, [member="Leo Vandermolen"], but you should definitely add your character's current adventures to your biography, it'll kind of give you a little insight on his personality and perhaps give some ideas on his previous activities in his young adulthood.

Graf's biography can be used as a sort of template if you need help brainstorming.
I regret nothing.

 

[Ignatius]

If [member="Tanomas Graf"] is throwing his bio out there, You should look at mine.

Use different details, and even make up plot points that made him into the person he is. Why is he the lone ranger type? Why did he become a criminal? Make a story from that.

[member="Leo Vandermolen"],

 

[Leo Vandermolen]

[member="Akuma"] You're Bio is one of the most well put together bio's that I have laid eyes upon.

[member="Tanomas Graf"] You can't just Rick-roll people like that

 

[Ignatius]

[member="Leo Vandermolen"], She was an old character of mine that I converted over to the Starwars site when I first made the character. So yeah. I have a lot of backstory.

 

[Leo Vandermolen]

Thanks for the help guys! Rewrote my bio from a first-person perspective and added a bot to it, tell us what you think.
[member="Akuma"] [member="Tanomas Graf"]

 

[Ignatius]

[member="Leo Vandermolen"], Looks much better. The detail is added, and it fleshes out the character a bit more.