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That's right boys, yet another feedback thread that's appearing on the board. I know yall are probably tired of seeing all of them put up. So on to the pressing issue. I've been writing Lanik Dawnstar since the site came back online. He started as an exile that wanted nothing to do with the Jedi at all, and slowly made his way back into the order of the Republic doing some cool shit. Now getting knighted. What do yall think of Lanik and the direction he's heading? What should I do to improve my writing of him? Is there something I should change? Any sort of writing tips yall can provide? (I'll take a word of the day calendar because I'm a dunce and I'm sure it will help me.)
Be real with me yall and don't pander to my already ginormous ego.
