Approved Tech KM - 100 Fluroantimonic Acid Shells

[cheshire_kitty]

Image Source: N/A
Intent: [SIZE=12pt]The KM - 100 Fluroantimonic Acid Shells are created as special ammunition for use in battles against armour and vehicles for standard artillery.[/SIZE]
Development Thread: If necessary
[SIZE=10.5pt]Manufacturer:[/SIZE] Overwatch Industries
Model: KM -100 Fluroantimonic Acid Shells
[SIZE=10.5pt]Affiliation:[/SIZE] Overwatch Industries and its clients
Modularity: No
[SIZE=10.5pt]Production:[/SIZE] Mass-produced (transaction approval required to use)
Material: Ceramic outer with fluoroantimonic acid inside
Length: 1m
Weight: 15kg
Effective Range: 10m

Description:
The KM-100 Fluroantimonic Acid Shells are artillery shells, designed to be used with standard artillery, in the destruction of enemy vehicles, and infantry armor. Contact with skin also results in severe chemical burns, or worse. These shells are powerful, but rather heavy. This increase in weight lowers the total ammunition of any artillery using it by one for every five shells loaded. The artillery shells utilize standard artillery deliver (ie fired from artillery cannon) to hit their target.

 

[ADM. Reshmar]

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review

Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review

WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review

SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[ADM. Reshmar]

[member="Konrad von Grimmelshausen"]

Hello, I will be reviewing this today.

FIrst off I need an explanation about how this eats metal and not organic tissue. What does it use to dissolve metal?

 

[cheshire_kitty]

Edited. Now it dissolves metal and gives humans and other organic lifeforms with chemical burns or worse.

[member="Reshmar"]

 

[cheshire_kitty]

[member="Reshmar"] I made an edit to increase the weight of the shells increasing it from 10kg to 15kg with no other changes made to the submission.

 

[ADM. Reshmar]

Can I get you to add a section in the description about the delivery methods of the warhead? Are these strictly a standard artillery delivered warhead? are they missile based? just a bit more in the description about how they are fired.

 

[cheshire_kitty]

[member="Reshmar"] Edited!

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Konrad von Grimmelshausen"]

add a section in the description about the delivery methods of the warhead? Are these strictly a standard artillery delivered warhead? are they missile based? just a bit more in the description about how they are fired.

As requested above, please add a portion of the description which explains what sort of weapon is used to fire these, their propulsion (if any), etc.

This should also follow the ranged weapon template, so please add all relevant portions from that.

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[cheshire_kitty]

[member="B.I.A.N.C.A MK VII"]

The description has been updated with the requested information.

The ranged weapon template is not appropriate for this sub. These are not ranged weapons, but rather ammunition.

Fields such as Ammunition Capacity, Rate of Fire, Range are not applicable for this sub, as they are determined by the artillery using this ammunition, not the ammunition itself.

And previous ammunition subs have not been asked to conform to this template, but were rather accepted using the "basic" template.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Konrad von Grimmelshausen"]
Does the acid splash? If so the effective range is wholly appropriate for this submission.

 

[cheshire_kitty]

[member="B.I.A.N.C.A MK VII"]

Done. Added effective range.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks!

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.