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Approved Starship KI-SB-MkI Aka The Bomberdier

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sabrina

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Intent: To build a decent bomber for the one sith
Development Thread: none
Manufacturer: Krayt Industries
Model: KI-SB-MkI Aka The Bombadier
Affiliation: The one sith and her allies
Modularity: None
Production: Mass production
Material: durasteel,
transparisteel
Description: This is designed to be strike bomber, for the one sith. Officially it is a tactical bomber, capable of wrecking havoc on weakened ships. This would be done with it`s homing photon torpedoes, also with it can do strafing with it repeating laser cannons against an unsheild ship.

​Ship it self is part of first generation small scale ships to be produced by Krayt Industries. It hand built and stressed tested inside krayt Industries. The reason these ships are hand built, is to help provide unskilled jobs in the under city of coruscant. While machines are present, they only fabricate the parts, the personal do the assembling and welding painting. In a production line similar to that of model ford T, one man/woman does one job all day.

Classification: Bomber
Role: Bomber
Height: 4
Width: 14
Length: 12
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Solar ionization reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: Class 1
Minimum Crew: 1
Optimal Crew: 1 + astomech droid
Armaments:

2 Repeating Laser Cannons
2 homing proton torpedo launchers (4 warheads each)
Non-Combative Attachments:
  • Communications Array
  • Encryption Network
  • Ejector Seat
  • Standard Deflector Shield Generator
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Targeting Systems
Passenger Capacity: 0
Cargo Capacity: 70 kilos
Consumables: 4 days
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 3
 
Thanks for waiting, there are a few things that I'd like to draw your attention to before this can be approved though.

The most glaring is that you have a rather short description that doesn't say much about the ship itself other than its intended attack runs. There's no soul or fluff there and we usually require one ful paragraph at minimum. I'm also wondering if you meant to use proton torpedoes which are standard bomber fare. Yeah photon torpedoes exist in SW despite mostly being a star trek thing, but they're generally considered ancient tech and have a very poor cannon source. Can you also change 'escape pods' to 'ejector seat' which is typically considered standard for fighters/bombers/interceptors anyways and drop the Holonet transceiver?

Lastly, there already is a Reaper-class fighter in case you're unaware. You don't have to change the name if you don't want to, I just thought you should be aware.
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Alright, drop the holonet transceiver in the non-combat attachments and let me know if you want to keep the photon torpedoes of if that was just overlooked as well and this can be approved.
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