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Keeper Kara

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Ex-Solider | Ex-Spy | Doctor
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create a master/companion for Morrigan.
  • ​Image Credit: Edited from original image: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/YJGdK. Original Artist: Adam Fisher.
  • Role: Keeper and teacher for Morrigan. She ensures that the younger woman does not attack her allies and restrains her when the she loses her mind.
  • Links: N/A.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 25.
  • Force Sensitivity: Knight.
  • Species: Zabrak.
  • Appearance: Light Grey skin, red eyes, horns atop head, slight build.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Kara.
  • Loyalties: Former affiliation with Sith Empire. No current affiliation.
  • Wealth: Average wealth. Relies on money given from odd-jobs. Kara controls both her wealth and Morrigan's.
  • Notable Possessions: None.
  • Skills: Exceptional skill with lightsaber.
  • Personality: Keeper Kara is a serious woman. She rarely smiles and has little sense of humour. She has a permanent scowl on her face, and shows no hesitation in dispensing insults to others. Others find her abrasive and unfriendly, however she shows some reserved affection for Morrigan (albeit only a little).
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Single-bladed Red lightsaber.
  • Combat Function: Kara’s priority is not attacking hostiles, but instead defending Morrigan. She will stay close by the girl’s side.
Strengths
  • Skilled duellist – Kara is adept at using a lightsaber and can hold her own in a fight. Her foes should beware of her quick lunges and swipes.
  • Strong – A slender frame belies a great strength. Her arms, strong from holding back Morrigan, can deliver powerful blows.
Weaknesses
  • Defending her charge – Kara’s main priority is defending Morrigan and she is reluctant to leave her side. She will not pursue enemies, nor will engage an enemy if it means leaving Morrigan exposed to attack.
  • Weak to force attacks – Kara has had little training to defend against force attacks. While she is not entirely vulnerable to such an attack, they are much more effective than conventional attacks.
Force powers:
Legend:
Novice - Apprentice - Adept - Expert - Master*

Force Push: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]
Force Scream: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]
Throw Lightsaber: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]

Lightsaber Forms
Legend:
Novice - Apprentice - Adept - Expert - Master*

Shii-Cho: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]
Makashi: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]
Soresu: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]
Ataru: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]
Shien: []|||||||||||||||||||||||||[]

* Skill is represented by a bar. The more complete the bar is, the greater the skill. Colours can be used to quickly gauge the skill level.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Kara is an outcast from the Sith. Her history is as varied as it is violent. Growing up as a slave to the Sith, she was offered a place among their ranks at a young age. She refused. Her master, despite being angry, sensed great potential in her. He said he would accept the girl anyway, but he would not accept “extra baggage”. He slaughtered Kara’s parents, using force lightning. Afterwards, he hauled the screaming child into the night.

Kara grew strong in her training and fed strongly off the dark side of the force. She hated her master and her passion is what fueled her power. She focused all her time on dueling, in which she excelled. She fell behind on her lessons in the force however, the images of her parent’s horrific deaths halting any progress she made.

Not until she reached twenty-two years old did she challenge her master. It was a brutal fight, but Kara eventually emerged victorious. She was set to inherit her master’s mantle, but in a fit of revulsion refused the privilege. Doing so made her a pariah of the Sith community and she eventually left the faction.

After leaving Sith space, Kara would work as a slaver. It was a profitable business for the woman, but fraught with danger. It satisfied her somewhat, but she always was seeking for more excitement. Three years after leaving the Sith, Kara would meet Morrigan.

The girl looked feral and apparently hungered for flesh. She had been caught attacking one of her thugs in a fit of hunger, but had been too weak to take the hulking man down. She was about slay the miserable creature when she noticed two things. The first was the girl’s strong connection to the force; the second was the intelligent look in her eyes. She realised that the girl was not a beast, she simply lacked control.

She decided to teach the girl, in a flash of pity for the wretched thing. Her choice still surprises her to the day. Perhaps she still remembers a little Zabrak girl screaming for her parents. Morrigan was not a simple student however. The girl couldn’t control her hunger and Kara is forced to watch her closely, lest she attack her allies. Her slaver compatriots abandoned her but, in a strange way, she sensed she had finally made the right choice in life.
 
[member="Morrigan Lethani"]

So a few things that need addressed:
  • Please detail what Force skills she actually knows, even if you say she neglected that part of her training
  • Remove mention of the muzzle and leash as that is bordering too closely on the line of inappropriateness
 
Ex-Solider | Ex-Spy | Doctor
Edits have been made as per request.

Changes:
  • Changed notable possessions to none.
  • Added bars to force powers, so her skill in that area can be quantified.
  • Added bars to lightsaber forms, so her skill in that area can be quantified.
  • Historical information edited and inappropriate themes removed.
[member="Taeli Raaf"]
 

Zeradias Mant

Democracy Dies in Darkness
[member="Morrigan Lethani"]

NPCs shouldn't outshine PCs in terms of power or abilities, and this NPC is either proficient or excellent at the majority of lightsaber forms. Using the bars you provided, please limit two of them to expert level, and an additional one or two to adept or below.
 
Ex-Solider | Ex-Spy | Doctor
I think I've underestimated the complexity of the character and how to fit her in the guidelines of the template. I will review the character and make a new submission if necessary. For now can this thread please be archived. Thank you.

[member="Taeli Raaf"] [member="Zeradias Mant"]
 
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