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[Tarishee]

Join the Forgotten Defeat​

Today!​

Help our cousins flaws, stop the resistance, stop the rebellion. Only you, can make a change. ​

Meet at kashyyyk night time​

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

I think...you're going to need to give people a bit more information because I have no idea what you're advertising...and there's no link to your faction.

 

[Darth Abyss]

[member="Tarishee"] you should also shorten the info text on your faction page, and maybe change the formatting a little, because no one is going to read it like this.

Also we really don't have a very high demand for yet another empire like faction, even one spiced up with Mandos lol.

Despite all this, good luck.

 

[Tarishee]

Thanks guys, i really needed the help to start off better, i'll try to improve thx thx thx so excited now! Cant wait to show of mah nerd stats! Thanks!

 

[Tarishee]

Also what should i use, what type of fonts do you guys prefer?

 

[Tarishee]

[member="Tarishee"] you should also shorten the info text on your faction page, and maybe change the formatting a little, because no one is going to read it like this.

Also we really don't have a very high demand for yet another empire like faction, even one spiced up with Mandos lol.

Despite all this, good luck.

What font should i use? I'll need help, also this faction is a mix. Just like Thrawn would have his Faction with lots of Chiss i'll include mandalorians. I understood the link part but what font and maybe can you help please?

 

[Tarishee]

I think...you're going to need to give people a bit more information because I have no idea what you're advertising...and there's no link to your faction.

Also when you say put in more information, like what is important that i should put down for an advertisement? Please help. D;

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Tarishee"]
For a start there's no link to your faction so people can join.

Secondly:

Spoiler

Help our cousins flaws, stop the resistance, stop the rebellion. Only you, can make a change. ​

Meet at kashyyyk night time​

This tells me nothing about your faction at all. Give me some details about who you are, what you stand for, what positions are available.

 

[Poe]

[member="Tarishee"]

I love your passion and creativity, but are you looking to unite Mandos, Stormies, or Clones? Or all three, since you dropped Cousins.

A link to your faction would be appreciated so I can at least see something you are not putting in your Ad.

 

[Tarishee]

Oh the forgotten defeat? Yeah i'm changing it, i messed up alot in spelling and especially some other errors, i apologize for this fatal mistake. I'm re-making the forgotten defeat, and adding and taking out some important things. Thanks for the note and help!