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Approved Starship Incensior-class Bomber

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: A bomber for the Mantellian Commonwealth
  • Image Source: OGame Ships
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Mantellian Commonwealth
  • Affiliation: Mantellian Commonwealth
  • Model: Incensior-class Bomber

  • Production: Minor
  • Material: Titanium (hull, frame), durasteel (bomb magazine)
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Bomber
  • Length: 45 meters
  • Width: 11 meters
  • Height: 13 meters
  • Armament: Very High
  • Major: Proton bombs, plasma bombs
  • Minor: two double laser cannon turrets
  • Defenses: Average
  • Squadron Count: Low: 8
  • Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Hyperdrive Class: None.
STANDARD FEATURES
'All standard features'

ADVANCED SYSTEMS


Strengths:
  • Heavy bomber, carrying many bombs for anti-ground and anti-ship fighting
  • Fast
Weaknesses:
  • Poor maneuvreability
  • Carrier based, no hyperdrive
Description:
  • Crew: 5
  • Passengers: 0
  • Cargo capacity: 250kg
  • Consumables: 1 Week
 
Good morning! So right off the top I'm actually only here to make one minor correction.

I'm going to need you to link the manufacturer for this fine piece of explosive wonder.

That out of the way, this submission is rather underpowered. You can bump up the ratings {+2} or you can bump up the production and still bump a rating {+1}. Keep in mind you dont have to, just merely a piece of advice. If not, just get that manufacturer linked and I'll give this a nice little stamp.

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[member="Adron Malvern"] Good night! 1112pm here. :D

I was told that stating that my faction produces them is enough, in the last four accepted submissions.

I will increase the Armament to Very High.
 
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