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Approved Starship Imperial Intersector II-class sloop

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: Armed Sloop

Image Source: Vindicator-class by FractalSponge

Canon Link: N/A

Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: Imperial Remnant

Model: Intersector II-class Sloop

Squad Size: low

Affiliation: Imperial Remnant

Production: Mass-Produced

Material: Starship Components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Armed Sloop

Length: 50 meters

Width: 35 meters

Height: 9 meters

Armament: High

2 Twin Light Turbolasers (Dorsal, Ventral)

4 Quad Heavy Laser Cannons (2 Dorsal, 2 Ventral)

12 General Purpose Warhead Launchers

1 Tractor Beam Projector

Defenses: Average

Hangar: N/A

Maneuverability Rating:Low

Speed Rating: Average

Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2

SPECIAL FEATURES

N/A

Strengths:

Armed: Practically bristling with weaponry, the Intersector is formidable in a fight against vessels of a similar, or larger size.


Weaknesses:

Resupply: Due to the sheer amount of meterage required for the power supply of the weapons and shields, space on the Intersector is at a premium, with laughably small crew quarters and a single refresher. In addition to being uncomfortable, the Intersector needs frequent resupply and will often need to be accompanied on long-range expeditions by a tanker.

Description:

The Intersector II-class sloop is among the smallest warship in the Imperial Remnant and is commanded by a Lieutenant or above. Frequently, the sloops are a naval officer's first command. These sloops are meant to fly in squadrons of five to six, accompanied by a tanker, on scouting duty or patrol.

The ship can run on a skeleton crew of seven, but has 20 due to the need for combat redundancy. Consequently, the crew hotracks.

This vessel is part of the 7th Fleet Initiative, which aims to furnish the Imperial Remnant with a series of modern, combat ready warships to better protect Imperial interests.

Crew: 20
Consumables: 2 months
 
Hey, @Shran! I'm going to be working with you through the review/approval process, but before I can slap an approval on this, I have just a couple things i'd like to chat with you about.

Please move the link to the "Image Source" bullet. If you could do that, it would be greatly appreciated.



Shran said:
Restricted Missions: N/A
You can remove this if you like. That bullet is dedicated simply to SSD subs



Shran said:
Manufacturer: Imperial Remnant

Model: Intersector II-class Sloop

Affiliation: 7 A&C
Please link the Manufacturer and Affiliation if possible, thanks

You're missing a "Squadron Size" category as well. Please ensure you are using the correct template when piecing together a submission. If you could add this, with an appropriate rating, that would be fantastic

Please remember to tag me with any edits or clarifications made to this
 
[member='Shran'], Thanks for the adjustments so far, but we still have just a little ways to go, before slapping an approval on this



Shran said:
Affiliation: 7 A&C
Please link this if possible. That would be amazing

But overall, if you'd be so kind as to model this sub after the "Small Craft" Template, that would be incredible. That way everything carries the same continuity as other submissions. This includes ratings and simple layout as well. I understand Factory subs can be a daunting task, but please do not be dissuaded by my words.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: (Example: 'A personal weapon for Darth Scabious' or 'an advanced armored personnel carrier for the Republic')
  • Image Source: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)
  • Canon Link: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)
  • Primary Source: (Please link and cite the sources which you are modifying for your use in your submission.)
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: (Kuat Drive Yards, BlasTech Industries, [Insert Major Faction Name], [Insert Character Name], etc. You must link to any Company used as a manufacturer to their submission or canon article. For Manufacturing limitations on who can make what, please see For more details see the Star Ship rules)
  • Affiliation: (Individual Character Name (an individual PC/NPC who is permitted to use this item), Company Name(s) (Companies authorised to use this submission), Faction Name(s) (Factions authorised to use this submission, Closed-Market (Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase), Open-Market (May be used by any character without permission from the Manufacturer), other potential options include a submitted NPC unit, or another general organisation/group. Optional. If you chose Limited, Semi-Unique, or Unique in Productivity above please list what groups/characters can use this submission in role-plays. For Affilation limitations on who can field what, please see For more details see the Star Ship rules)
  • Model: (Example: TIE (Twin Ion Engine). For submissions where a model wouldn’t be appropriate, such as a custom walking stick, put ‘N/A’ for ‘Not Applicable’.)

  • Production: The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (A single small unit, squad, or squadron), Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: Small task force, not entire factions.), Minor (Large groups of characters. (IE: Multiple factions, companies, or groups.), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.) Characters refer to NPCs & PCs. For production limitations on who can make what, please see For more details see the Star Ship rules)))
  • Material: (What is your submission made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable, to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel.' See pre-requisites for: Restricted Materials. Link: Manufacturing Compounds, Metals, Compounds)
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: (Starfighter, Bomber, Scout, Atmospheric Fighter, Atmospheric Bomber, Atmospheric Scout, Gunship, Dropship, Interceptor.)
  • Length: (Via Metric System. Max: 50 meters. Examples: X-wing: 12.5 meters, Y-wing: 16 meters, Millenium Falcon: 34.7 meters, Slave I: 21.5 meters)
  • Width: (Via Metric System. Max: 50 meters. Examples: Y-wing: 2.9 meters, Millenium Falcon: 25.61 meters, Slave I: 21.3 meters)
  • Height: (Via Metric System. Max: 50 meters. Examples: Y-wing: 7.9 meters, Millenium Falcon: 8.27 meters, Slave I: 7.8 meters)
  • Armament: (You may provide your armament in list format and must provide your vessel an Armament Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. Armament Ratings are scaled in relation to the class of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. Armament Ratings provide only basic weaponry unless the ship also has a description of weapons. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology)
  • Defenses: (You may provide your shield and armor systems in list format and must provide your vessel an Defense Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. Where None is a man in a space suit hanging on to an engine, Average is typical defense, and Extreme is heaviest defense with heavy armor plating and multiple layers of powerful shields. Defensive Ratings are scaled in relation to the type of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. You should list particular systems under advanced systems. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Approved Technology)
  • Squadron Count: (Please provide the amount of fighters this submission would have in a squadron. The average squadron for any starfighter is 12, at lengths averaging 12.5 meters. The bigger the fighter, the smaller your Squadron Count should be. The smaller the fighter, the bigger your Squadron count can be. [None: 1 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 8 | Average: 12 | Moderate: 16 | High: 20 | Very High: 24 | Extreme: 28] Squadron Sizes may be listed as just the rating.)
  • Maneuverability Rating: (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. How agile is your ship? Can it take tight turns? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Maneuverability will be more agile than a Star Destroyer with a Low rating.
  • Speed Rating: (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. How fast is your ship in normal space? How fast can it take off, how fast can it speed through a planet's atmosphere? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Speed will be quicker than a Star Destroyer with a Low Speed.
  • Hyperdrive Class: (The lower the number, the faster the ship. You may use decimals. [Very Slow: 10 | Average: 2 | Very Fast: 0.3] Going below 1 typically requires balancing out with other weaknesses. Links: Hyperdrive, Hyperdrive Comparisons)
STANDARD FEATURES
(Provide all of your submission's standard features, including non-combat items, here in a list -or- alternatively simply state 'all standard features'. This includes all features that are common for vessels of this class. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology, Shields, Engines)

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
(Provide all of your submission's advanced systems, including non-combat items and special weapons, here in a list. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Stealth technology and other advanced systems may require other weaknesses or reduced ratings for balance. Ensure significant capabilities from systems are included in the Strengths and Weaknesses lists. Examples include: Stealth systems, Advanced ECM systems, Crystal gravfield traps, HIMS, Molecular shields. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology, Shields, Engines)
Strengths:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses:
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)
Description: (Describing your submission's history is optional. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc.. There is no requirement for amount of words here so long as you meet the minimum requirements for your advanced systems.)

Namely here, though I'd just love it if you just ensure the rating wording against the template i have placed into the spoiler above
 
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