Feedback I live for outside approval!

[Beltran Rarr]

Actually I don't, but I am curious what people think of my writing. I've been doing this roleplay thing for years now (decades actually....gawd I feel old). I feel like I can string a sentence together pretty well, but I'm interested in some constructive feedback. Anything you guy see that I do on the regular (or not so regular) that could use some improvement? Hit me up, as the kids say!

 

[Ingrid L'lerim]

I hope it is not a problem to give a short answer.
I think you write very well, I really enjoy playing with you. Both in the field of combat and when the characters are just talking.
Actually next to FN-999, on the top step of the podium to me in terms of pvp. I enjoyed our pvp match on Voss the best of all my pvp matches.

 

[Beltran Rarr]

Thanks! I very much enjoy roleplaying with you as well! I am excited to see where our characters end up if we keep running into each other. The duel at Voss is one of my favorite fight scenes as well.

Ingrid L'lerim

 

[Darth Solipsis]

Garbage

I kid I kid..

In all seriousness, I thoroughly enjoy writing with you and reading your content. You know when to throw and pull punches, which in itself is an admirable quality. You keep things on edge and in the moment, never dragging something out or shining focus on you alone. Your posts are well thought out and well written, couldn't ask for a better writer to tell a story.

10/10

 

[Beltran Rarr]

Darth Solipsis Hey right back at you! Laevus is quickly becoming my favorite all time Sith. You have such a knack at making the atmosphere nice and edgy without it becoming campy or gimmicky. 10/10 best Sith. Looking forward to finishing up our thread and hoping we get a chance to write more together later on!