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Approved Tech Hunters Bow

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Acaleus Thorn

CEO of Enryu Corp
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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Enryu Corp[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Model:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Hunter Bow[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Enryu Corp[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Modularity:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]-Comes in different color[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Minor[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Material: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Bow string, red dot, laminanium[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Bow[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Size: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]76 cm[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Weight: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]6 kgs[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Ammunition Type: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Arrows[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Ammunition Capacity:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Hunters Bow comes with 30 arrows[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Reload Speed: [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Slow[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] for someone who is not good with the weapon[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Very Fast [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]for a trained veteran[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Effective Range: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Long Range[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Rate of Fire:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] None[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Stopping Power: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Recoil: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]None[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]SPECIAL FEATURES[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]The bow opens to extend itself and can be ready to fire in just seconds[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Could be repainted[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]The length of fire goes to 120 meters to perfect fire[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Has the potential to penetrate armor when the archer isn´t moving when drawing arrows and aiming[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]The precisions depends on the user[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Isn´t resistant to damage in general, making it useless[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]DESCRIPTION[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]The bow can be expanded by the push of a button, extending its limbs and the string along the way. It can be kept away by pressing that same button. The bow comes with a red dot, for better aim. If the user is strong when drawing the bow back and if the arrow is resistant enough, it has the potential to penetrate light armor of shields. Comes in the color the user chooses. [/SIZE]
 
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For posterity, let's clarify these a little:

  • Can penetrate into armor if the archer isn´t moving when drawing arrows and aiming
DESCRIPTION
The bow can be expanded by the push of a button, extending its limbs and the string along the way. It can be kept away by pressing that same button. The bow comes with a red dot, for better aim. If the user is strong when drawing the bow back and if the arrow is resistant enough, it can penetrate almost any thin armor or shield. Comes in the color the user chooses.
It's fine to say that the bow has enough force for the arrows to penetrate armor. However we need to be more clear about what kind of armor it is capable of doing this to, as even some thin armors may be made of metals that are far stronger than the bow and arrow combined. We also need to be a little more careful about how it's worded.

I would recommend putting that it "has the potential to penetrate light armor and shields."

It's not guaranteeing that it will, and gives any PC that might go against this the ability to write their own damages taken.

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Strengths:
  • The length of fire goes to 120 meters to perfect fire
  • Can penetrate into armor if the archer isn´t moving when drawing arrows and aiming
You'll need to make the same edit to the strengths.

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