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Approved NPC High Admiral Raxis Keyes

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: He will act as the Commander of Chief if the Catharian Navy, And will give out jobs toward aspiring hunters and the like via the hands of the Catharians.
  • ​Image Credit: SWTOR
  • Role: Commander in Chief of the Catharian Navy
  • Links: Xzaien
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: Biologically 52 Standard Years, Chronologically 5,000+ Standard Years
  • Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User
  • Species: Human
  • Appearance: Relatively middle aged, wise man. Constantly wearing the Uniform of the High Admiral of the Catharian Peoples. Often has this empty look in his eyes and speaks in a moderately friendly and heavily laden Inner-Core Accent.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: High Admiral Raxis Keyes
  • Loyalties: Catharian Navy / Catharian Autocrat
  • Wealth: Relatively Wealthy, gained via High Admiral Pay.
  • Notable Possessions: Star of Coruscant Medal, Medal given to those who have shown valor and skill during the Mandalorian Wars
  • Skills: Military Tactician
  • Personality: Friendly outwardly, yet Lawful and kind.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Wits and Tactical Ability
  • Combat Function: Strong Support
Strengths:
  • Tactical Ability: Years training in the famous Republic Academies of Old have nurtured and created a Admiral whose skill rivals that of the Ancient Jedi Prodigal Knight.
  • Charisma: Being a High Admiral, charismatic and skill in public oration is highly prized within the Catharian Navy. This skill itself being a sink of swim type. Causing those with high skill to be superseded by those of higher charisma.
Weaknesses:
  • Hibernation Degeneration Disease: Not all emerged from their pods unscathed or without any adverse affects. Hibernation Degeneration Disease is a chronic progressive disease that eventually saps out from the person affected stamina and lung capacity. The means to a cure to rectify this disease are currently unknown as it comes from Precursor Technology. The disease isn't lethal yet hampers combat effectiveness to a horrendous degree. Keyes is useless in a melee situation and easily over powered by strong assailants.
  • Pride and Hubris: Keyes's pride often makes himself the butt of many a joke within the Catharian Armed Forces. However it does make him easy to make fun of or joke about. The pride and hubris is a double edged sword in that it makes him aspire to do his best, while throwing his underlings and direct command chains down the drain.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Prior to his encounter with Xzaien's original small installation on the world of Cathay, Keyes was a Rear Admiral in the Republic Navy during the ancient Mandalorian Wars and served alongside the famous Prodigal Knight during his exploits to destroy the Mandalorian Threat Millennia Ago. During these wars he amassed a large following of Republic Navy Personnel and eventually came to support the Prodigal Knight during his turn to the Dark-Side. Once this Prodigal Knight turned to the light at the behest of a Jedi skilled in Battle Mediation, Keyes served alongside the Prodigal Knight's apprentice. Once the Sith were driven back on their back-foot after the destruction of an Ancient Super-weapon, Keyes defected once again to the Republic and eventually was dishonorably discharged. Followed by his closest friends and fleet stolen from the Sith, Keyes eventually found out about Xzaien's growing power on the world of Cathay. Here he submitted to her rule and eventually came to form the First Catharian Navy and using his funds and political connections to help Xzaien open up Cathay to the greater Galaxy and add to the growing number of Colonists seeking a new life on Cathay mainly Cathar who have been displaced during the Mandalorian Wars and refugees fleeing Sith Orbital Bombardments. During his time as the Commander in Chief of the Catharian Navy, Keyes assisted Xzaien in procuring old surplus ships from either the Republic and the now loosing Sith as well as expanding the demesne of Cathay from one Star System to two. But his work to expand Catharian Hegemony was driven back once Xzaien ordered for Cathay to seclude itself from the rest of the Galaxy, loosing the acquired worlds in the Unknown Regions and only being keeping the Birth World of the Hegemony firmly within Catharian Hands. Keyes followed the Decree of his leader to enter into the Hibernation Pod, Now awoken nearly five thousand years later into a ailing Galaxy, Keyes's goal to secure the Hegemony is even more strained, thanks to a lack of large Capitol Ships and trade arrangements with foreign powers.
 
[member="Xzaien"] Alright! Let's take a look at what you got. First off, I really like this character. Hibernation-pod stuff is an interesting idea and I am intrigued on how this character will deal with the new Galaxy. There's just a few things we need to address links wise.



Xzaien said:
Image Credit: SWTOR
Please link the Wikia page for this character from SWTOR if one exists. Just standard procedure as we need to be able to trace the sources.



Xzaien said:
Links: TBD TILL REST IS WRITTEN UP
WHEN you have more stuff written up, and/or if you have any now, please come back and link them here as it will help us keep everything connected for ease of access and such. You will be able to do this by using the Pre-Codex/WIP system.

Overall, I think this is a great idea. A suggestion I would have is perhaps mention Keyes going into the hibernation pods in Historical Info so readers aren't totally confused by how he is chronologically 5 millennia old. Other than that, get the linking stuff done and get back to me so we can move this on up for a second opinion!
 
[member="Xzaien"] This looks great. Thank you. But again, is there a wookia link for the picture you have used? Simply using SWTOR won't work if there is a link to be used. Everything else is perfect and I am more than ready to pass this on up once we have this tiny detail taken care of.
 
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