Writing: I've always been a fan of your writing. It's effortlessly readable and really, really funny. It reminds me a bit of Douglas Adams. Straightforward, packing a punch, with an edge of humor. Good stuff, my friend!
I would like to see you write more in the third person, but that's more of a personal preference thing. Maybe it's because everyone else on the boards writes in third person, so once I hit your posts, it sort of takes me out out of the story for a second.
As far as your characters go: Zatten is the character that I've written with the most, and is by far my favorite. He's hella entertaining. Honestly, I really like all of the characters of yours that I've threaded with, especially Bond, Cross, and even Rivvy. My only critique character-wise (again not about your writing) is that some of your anime playbys make your characters seem a bit similar to one another. But other than that, awesome characters!
