Haran

[Kylo Kyr'am]

Name: Haran

Source Here


Region: outer


System: Unknown System Name


Suns: 1


Orbital Position: 4th


Moons: 1 unexplored habitable moon


System Features:
Asteroid Belt around the Planet


Coordinates:

Rotational Period: 24


Orbital Period: 365

Class: Terrestrial


Diameter: 12,756 km


Atmosphere: Type I


Climate: The climate of the Planet is earth like. Depending on where you are you could have snow, or hear or rain, or even thunder and lightning. But due to the bombs dropping it left radiation in the air, door the first 100 years after the apocalypse the rain was black, mixed with ash and radiation and wound up killing all plant life on the planet. 300 years after the bombs fell the radiation for the most part has dissipated and the train that falls now is only slightly irradiated.


Gravity: Standard


Primary Terrain:
• Desert Wasteland
• Collapsed Cities
• Mountain wasteland
• Dead Grasslands
• Radiated Canyons
• Dead Forrest

Native Species:
Before Apocalyptic Holocaust:
• Humans
After Apocalyptic Holocaust:
• Humans
• Zombies/Ghouls


Immigrated Species:
• Humans
• Zabraks
• Twi'leks
• Various other sentient beings


Primary Languages: Galactic Standard Basic


Government:
Before Apocalyptic Holocaust:
A Democratic Government
After Apocalyptic Holocaust:
None (further explained in history)


Population:
Before Apocalyptic Holocaust:
600 million
After Apocalyptic Holocaust:
400,000


Demonym: Wastelanders


Major Imports:
• Food, Meats Vegetables, Fruits, Grains,
• Weapons
• Building Materials


Major Exports: N/A


Affiliation:
• Justice Shipping Ltd.
• Various scrabbling Tribes

Major Locations:
• The Demon's Void

Source Here
The Demon's Void was once a prosperous major city named Paledsville. The city was the direct hit of 1 of the 1,777 Nuclear Warheads that fell from the Galactic Empire. The Demon's Void is now filled with Radiated creatures and ghouls. Hidden in the Demon's Gate is a Underground Bunker that Justice Shipping Ltd. Uses as a headquarters.


• Justice Temple

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Source 2 here
The Justice Temple is the Justice Shipping Ltd.'s HQ. Before the bombs fell it was a military officer with a nuclear missile bunker used in the clone wars. The base has Barracks, private quarters, mess hall, a nuclear warhead storage plant. Armory, shooting range and a lounge room with a Cantina.


• Steel City

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Steel City was the Planet capital. It was hit directly with 8 of the bombs. Most of the cities major locations can only be reached through underground tunnels due to crumbled buildings and debris. 2 separate savage Tribes have made Steel City home. The Revanant Tribe which is the biggest most dangerous Tribe on the planet and the Eagle Tribe who are suspected zombie Collectors.


• Taryn & The Haunted Casino

Source Here
The small town of Taryn was a peaceful suburban town with the Taryn Casino overlooking the town on a cliff side. After the apocalyptic Holocaust the place became abandon and filled with the spirits of the people who were in the town and the casino when the bombs dropped. The spirits were said to be vengeful of those who wonder into the town or casino. Supposedly deep under the casino sits a vault that holds billions and billions of credits and gold. Few survivors have entered the casino looking for the treasure yet all have never been seen again. It is said the spirits or even the casino itself kills them out locks them in the vault. Not to mention the place is covered in a red lethal cloud of radiation, oxygen mask are recommended when visiting.


Culture:
Before the apocalyptic Holocaust the planets life was wonderful. Casinos, gambling, arts, entertainment, sports. But after the Galactic Empire launched 1,777 nuclear warheads into the Planet nothing was left. 800 years later the small civilization that survived separated into thier own little packs of family's known as tribes. Note days the people of the Planet hunt whatever animal they can find. Some resort to gambling in the casinos in the towns that some Tribes have rebuilt.


Technology: Outside the Justice Shipping Ltd. Company technology of the Planet is very limited due to everything being destroyed.


History: 16 BBY Darth Vader and Emperor Palpentine still on the hunt for Jedi and the Rebel Alliance. The Rebel Alliance traveled to the Planet to rally the entire planet against the Empire. The Emperor found this out and sent his agents to the Planet. They reported the entire planet was indeed all supporters of the Rebel Alliance.


The Emperor ordered several dozens ships to go to the Planet and lay waste to it. The Rebel Alliance discovered this thanks to spies and the Rebel Alliance begin evacuating people into bunkers that were deep underground instead of trying to flee the Planet knowing the Empire was waiting for them right above the Planet.


After 1 day the Imperial fleet was in position and launched 1,777 nuclear warheads onto the Planet. Millions and millions of people were unable to make into the bunkers and died in the nuclear explosions. Afterwards the Emperor wiped the Planet from all Galactic records and dismissed the bombing as it had never even happened. After 3 short hours, the world had ended, the Planet covered in radiation. Those that were outside during the bombing were either killed or radiated so bad that became a ghoul like zombies.


400 years passed and the radiation in the air dissipated. Survivors in the bunkers had died of old age but had children and they had children, so the descendants of the original people on the planet left the safety of their bunkers and begin a new life, forming Tribes, not knowing what the Planet looked like before the holocaust begin slowly rebuilding it as they saw fit. The survivors left were lost without no possible government begin separating into their own Tribes creating their own style governments controlling their own part of the Planet. Throughout the years people have refused to help the desolate world due to its destruction and debris scattered as well as it's various spots of high radiation. Most people leave the world alone although some brave explorers, pirates, mercenaries, and wanderers would explore the Planet for any valuable loot or even test the taryn casino's vault. But those who tested the vault were never seen again.


Notable PCs:
• [member=James Justice]
• [member=Kylo Kyr'am]
• [member=growl]
• [member=kalyn skirata]
• [member=Stardust]
• [member=Rawnie Tal'verda]
• [member=Doctor Azure]


Intent: To create a planet that can generate good stories and roleplay and a chance for people to inhabit it and rebuild on the live that was decimated there

 

[Taeli Raaf]

Under review

 

[Taeli Raaf]

[member="Kylo Kyr'am"]

So we've got a major problem here as follow:

As a standard rule for both the Codex and the Factory, plagiarism is not tolerated at all and this entire sub is one big example of this. Below will be a list of the places where plagiarism was evident:

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  Climate: The climate of the Planet is earth like. Depending on where you are you could have snow, or hear or rain, or even thunder and lightning. But due to the bombs dropping it left radiation in the air, door the first 100 years after the apocalypse the rain was black, mixed with ash and radiation and wound up killing all plant life on the planet.300 years after the bombs fell the radiation for the most part has dissipated and the train that falls now is only slightly irradiated.

  This entire section is taken, almost word for word, from the section of the Great War on the Fallout wiki that details what happened after the bombs fell.
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  Primary Terrain: • Desert Wasteland • Collapsed Cities • Mountain wasteland • Dead Grasslands • Radiated Canyons • Dead Forrest

  This is the terrain of the entire American Wasteland, and while not a blatant example of the above, in context it is taking the exact setting of the Fallout series
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  Native Species: Before Apocalyptic Holocaust: • Humans After Apocalyptic Holocaust: • Humans • Zombies/Ghouls

  You have Ghouls listed here, created through radiation released from the bombs. This is another blatant ripoff
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  The Justice Temple is the Justice Shipping Ltd.'s HQ. Before the bombs fell it was a military officer with a nuclear missile bunker used in the clone wars. The base has Barracks, private quarters, mess hall, a nuclear warhead storage plant. Armory, shooting range and a lounge room with a Cantina.

  This is a direct ripoff of the end area of the Fallout: New Vegas location in the Divide where the player faces Ulysses, even being called a temple as it is in game
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  Steel City was the Planet capital. It was hit directly with 8 of the bombs. Most of the cities major locations can only be reached through underground tunnels due to crumbled buildings and debris. 2 separate savage Tribes have made Steel City home. The Revanant Tribe which is the biggest most dangerous Tribe on the planet and the Eagle Tribe who are suspected zombie Collectors.

  This is taking direct example and setting from the destroyed sections of Washington D.C. from Fallout 3
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  The small town of Taryn was a peaceful suburban town with the Taryn Casino overlooking the town on a cliff side. After the apocalyptic Holocaust the place became abandon and filled with the spirits of the people who were in the town and the casino when the bombs dropped. The spirits were said to be vengeful of those who wonder into the town or casino. Supposedly deep under the casino sits a vault that holds billions and billions of credits and gold. Few survivors have entered the casino looking for the treasure yet all have never been seen again. It is said the spirits or even the casino itself kills them out locks them in the vault. Not to mention the place is covered in a red lethal cloud of radiation, oxygen mask are recommended when visiting.

  This is taking the entire setting and backstory of the Sierra Madre expansion pack from Fallout: New Vegas, all the way down to the red cloud of gas hanging over the place and the rumored vault of valuables under the casino
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  The Emperor ordered several dozens ships to go to the Planet and lay waste to it. The Rebel Alliance discovered this thanks to spies and the Rebel Alliance begin evacuating people into bunkers that were deep underground instead of trying to flee the Planet knowing the Empire was waiting for them right above the Planet.

  This is a blatant rip of the entire premise of Vault-Tec and the Vault project, but all that was subbed out was it was the Rebel Alliance instead moving people into underground bunkers.
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  After 1 day the Imperial fleet was in position and launched 1,777 nuclear warheads onto the Planet. Millions and millions of people were unable to make into the bunkers and died in the nuclear explosions.Afterwards the Emperor wiped the Planet from all Galactic records and dismissed the bombing as it had never even happened. After 3 short hours, the world had ended, the Planet covered in radiation. Those that were outside during the bombing were either killed or radiated so bad that became a ghoul like zombies.

  This is taking the backstory of the Fallout series and applying it to a world, including down to the length of time being three hours instead of two. I couldn't find the exact numbers of bombs that fell during that time on the wiki, but everything about this is wrong as ISD's would use turbolasers or land ground forces to lay waste to such a place

For all of the above reasons, I'm referring this sub to [member="Valiens Nantaris"] for denial and to decide what must be done about this violation as Codex Admin.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Kylo Kyr'am"] [member="Taeli Raaf"]
I have never played Fallout, but even I got the reference as soon as I saw this when my judge showed me.

On SWRP we allow, even encourage allusions or references to other sources. This however goes past homage and right into ripoff.

I am denying this because this is blatant plagiarism, worse it's unoriginal because you've even copied sections word for word.

In light of this, and because you should have known better I am applying a seven day Codex ban on you and all your alts.

The Codex rules are quite clear:
3. Plagiarism will not be tolerated.

Denied