Shiraya Fallen
I haven't done one of these before, but having written on Chaos for a little bit and in the endless quest of trying to improve my writing skills, I thought maybe I should give this thing a shot. So, if you have written with me, or read what I have wrote, I would greatly appreciate if you could give me some feedback on how I'm doing.
Specifically:
Any and all feedback would be much appreciated.
Specifically:
- Is the logic of my character clear or do you struggle to understand their motives?
- Do my transitions flow, or is the text chunky and difficult to read?
- Is there too much purple prose in my writing, or not enough?
- Do you see a clear picture of the environment? Or do the characters seem like disembodied talking heads? (I admit that this is an area where I feel like I struggle a lot)
Any and all feedback would be much appreciated.