Approved Tech Get Gud - Love, Kal

[Kalporra Djacq]

• Intent: To force Kalporra into the Life Day spirit and give a CIS exchange gift
• Image Source: https://faststrike-europe.com/
• Canon Link: Vibrowhip
• Primary Source: N/A

• Manufacturer: Kalporra Flynn
• Affiliation: Individual Character & Closed-Market (PC name to be added as submission modification after thread reveal)
• Model: Not Applicable
• Modularity: The cord can be replaced should it fray or snap
• Production: Unique
• Material: Ultrasonic vibration generator, cortosis-weave, durasteel

• Classification: Vibrowhip
• Size: Small
• Weight: Average

• Cortosis-Durasteel Alloy: Because it is not made of pure cortosis, the whip’s cord is able only to block lightsabers, not to short them out.

• Gotta Go Fast: Though the whip’s end is blunt and flat, settings for the unltrasonic vibration generator, conveniently controlled with a switch on the side of the handle, allows for enough damage dealt to make up for it.
• Ergonomic Grip: The handle is not just comfortable, but easy to hold onto throughout wielding.

• Short but Not Sweet: Training wheels more than anything, this weapon is only effective at personal distances. Kindda a bummer, but Kalporra’s not one make-to-please.
• Slippery Brittle When Wet: The flexibility of the cordage is the main feature of any whip, but, with this one, the character of the metalwork – both chemical and physical – reacts poorly to excessive amounts of water. Specifically, water causes the space between ductility and brittle failure to decrease substantially.

If backhanded generosity wasn’t a thing before, Kal just made it one. After being forced to participate in the annual Life Day tradition, she found a way to gift passive aggressively. Disobeying what had all but been a direct order from a Master would not bode well for her, but she could still push back against the authority she so hated in her own way. Plus, stroking her own ego in a not-so-subtle way: yes, please.

Note to recipient in gift box: ‘Don’t get wet. Be careful. Xxxx.’

 

[Runi Verin]

Under Review.

 

[Runi Verin]

[member="Kalporra Flynn"]

One of the rare times I actually ask someone to provide less information in a sub, but you've actually confused the ranged weapon and melee weapon templates on this one. Lot of fields don't really need to be in here. Fortunately, you just need to get rid of the following -

Ammunition Type: None
Ammunition Capacity: Not Applicable
Reload Speed: None
Effective Range: Personal
Rate of Fire: High
Stopping Power: Average
Recoil: None

 

[Kalporra Djacq]

Got it! Edited. Thanks, [member="Runi Verin"]!

 

[Runi Verin]

Approved.