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Approved Tech Furnace of Ession (Crystal)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Name: Furnace of Ession Crystal
  • Manufacturer: The Force
  • Affiliation: Nathan Bloodscrawl Nathan Bloodscrawl , The Jedi Order.
  • Market Status: Closed
  • Homeworld (optional): Ession.
  • Production: Unique
  • Modularity: Yes
  • Material: Lightsaber Crystal
PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Lightsaber Crystal.
  • Weight: Average
  • Color: Clear with streaks of brilliant orange. in daylight. Glows bright orange in darkness
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Low
    • Kinetic: Low
    • Lightsabers: Very High
    • High Heat Tolerance/Flames: Extreme
    • Dark Side: Extreme
    • Acid: None
    • Sonic: None
    • Cryo: None
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Crystal emitting lightside infused flames when installed in a Lightsaber, so powerful it can potentially damage Alchemized, Force Imbued objects, Dark Side Spirits, also carrying a potential chance to ignite enemies and objects upon being struck.
  • Imparts extreme resistance to flames through concentration, like a Sith Amulet.
  • Imparts extreme resistance to the Dark Side through Concentration.
  • Naturally boosts all Force Healing Attempts
  • Heavily boosts ease of using Pyrokinesis.
  • Naturally boosts the ability of the user to imbue objects with the Force (Imbued items always carry incendiary properties)
  • Similar to the Heart of The Guardian, it increases the effects of any Lightsaber Crystal that is installed in the same hilt it is installed in.
  • Powerful tool of meditation, at the cost of receiving fragments of the memories of past users
STRENGTHS
  • Cutter Plus: When installed in a lightsaber hilt, creates a bright orange blade down to its core that emits light side infused flames that can potentially damage Alchemized or Force Imbued items, Dark Side Spirits/Beings, and potentially could ignite objects and enemies being struck with light side infused flames that are potentially very difficult to put out and could possibly cling to them.
  • Imbue Plus: While on the owner's person, it aids in their ability to imbue objects with the Force (While using this item, an object imbued gains incendiary/Pyrokinesis effects)
  • Heal Plus: The crystal boosts the user's skill in Force Healing themselves and others by a slight amount.
  • Flame Plus: Carrying this crystal on one's person or in a hilt amplifies their ability to use Pyrokinesis by a slight amount
  • Dark Shield: Through intense concentration, one can shield themselves from nearly all forms of direct assault from the Dark Side, similar in function to a Sith Amulet
  • Flame Shield: Through intense concentration, one can protect themselves from extreme flame damage, similar to a Sith Amulet
  • Enhancement: Similar to the Legendary Heart of the Guardian, the Crystal slightly boosts the effects of any other crystal installed in the same lightsaber hilt that it is
WEAKNESSES
  • Force Voids: Absolutely will not function in Force Voids
  • Cryo: Suffering direct cryo damage causes the blade of any lightsaber hilt it's in to shut off for a few minutes until the crystal recovers from absorbing the attack
  • Sonic: Sonic bolts bend around any blade generated by the crystal
  • Acid: Immersion in acid would naturally destroy it
  • Neutral Weakness: Neutral Powers are slightly harder to summon the focus to use, and the user suffers more damage from them.
  • Slow: Any blade generated by this crystal is about a tenth slower to swing than normal due to intense gyroscopic forces generated.
  • Impossible to not sense: The Light Side Signature of the weapon cannot be hidden. It will be sensed quite a considerable distance away from the user
  • Influence: The user is forced to contend with the fragmented memories of every past wielder of the Crystal, as each left an imprint. This can manifest in the form of unwanted flashbacks, hallucinations of past users talking to them, questioning their decision making in a way that can be extremely uncomfortable, and the crystal itself attempts to influence the mind of the one who wields it to more merciful ends and may cause an unstable blade that shuts off at random if the user is dead set on a selfish aim. The more the User attempts to go their own way and not the Will of the Force, the more unstable any blade generated becomes. Worst of all, prolonged use of Pyrokinesis when wielding this crystal has a risk of mutating the user's body over time to better generate Pyrokinesis in various unpleasant ways, particularly in rendering the hands charred looking and skeletal (Yet retaining full functionality and strength). This may also reduce their ability to use offensive Neutral Powers even when no longer wielding the blade for a significant number of days afterward.
  • Meditation required: To use it's ability to aid in Force Healing or creating imbued items, one must be stationary, meditating and calm.
  • Conventional: It faces the same level of resistance from conventional and standard lightsaber Resistant materials not enhanced by the Force
DESCRIPTION

One of the most ancient and honored Relics in all of Ession's history at one time, but almost completely forgotten in the modern era, The Furnace of Ession chooses Jedi who have been beset by terrible tragedies, and/or made tragic mistakes in turn. The Crystal offers great power, and a chance to set right those wrongs and become a true champion of the light at the cost of potential mutation of the body to better channel the Force Power Pyrokinesis, as well as influencing the user towards decisions that may conflict with more selfish desires. Elaine Tear, who would later be forcibly altered into the shapeshifting Sith Sorceress known as The Battalion, wielded this crystal after it found its way into her possession. It was inside her lightsaber for years during her forced Exile from Ession as punishment for killing The Bloodscrawl Family, leaving her after she resumed her activities on Ession.

Nathan is not exactly certain what prompted the legendary crystal to choose him as the next wielder, given how his clandestine activities against The Cult of The Brain Demon go against the Jedi Code in letter and spirit, and considers it a sick cosmic joke on the part of The Force giving him something Elaine relied on.

Though he fully recognizes his culpability for her current state, and is constantly haunted by his decision given the horrors it unleashed on people he never intended to suffer, he is still ultimately held back by his bitterness towards her for not only killing his parents, but marrying his daughter while he spent centuries dead. Nathan wants to get rid of it, but the deadly foes he faces compel him to keep the crystal, perhaps in anticipation of using it on its previous owner. His complex alignment in the Force however, makes properly using the crystal to its fullest extent tricky...he constantly struggles against the merciful feelings it tries to impart, meaning he can only use it in truly grave emergencies, and absolutely cannot afford to use it in the presence of other Jedi, who would immediately sense it and question how he acquired such a powerful relic, or rather, why it chose him in particular...
 
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We have many issues though I do love the idea of BONK you are now on fire!...there is much to discuss.

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  • Crystal emitting lightside infused flames when installed in a Lightsaber, so powerful it can potentially damage Alchemized, Force Imbued objects, Dark Side Spirits, also carrying a potential chance to ignite enemies and objects upon being struck.
  • Imparts extreme resistance to flames through concentration, like a Sith Amulet.
  • Imparts extreme resistance to the Dark Side through Concentration.
  • Naturally boosts all Force Healing Attempts
  • Heavily boosts ease of using Pyrokinesis.
  • Naturally boosts ability to sense blaster bolts
  • Naturally boosts the ability of the user to imbue objects with the Force (Imbued items always carry incendiary properties)
  • Blade generated can be mentally controlled to switch between blade form and whip form
  • Similar to the Heart of The Guardian, it increases the effects of any Lightsaber Crystal that is installed in the same hilt it is installed in.
  • Powerful tool of meditation, at the cost of receiving fragments of the memories of past users

    • Cutter Plus: When installed in a lightsaber hilt, creates a bright orange blade down to its core that emits light side infused flames that can potentially damage Alchemized or Force Imbued items, Dark Side Spirits/Beings, and potentially could ignite objects and enemies being struck with light side infused flames that are potentially very difficult to put out and could possibly cling to them.
    • Imbue Plus: While on the owner's person, it aids in their ability to imbue objects with the Force (While using this item, an object imbued gains incendiary/Pyrokinesis effects)
    • Heal Plus: The crystal boosts the user's skill in Force Healing themselves and others by a slight amount.
    • Flame Plus: Carrying this crystal on one's person or in a hilt amplifies their ability to use Pyrokinesis by a slight amount
    • Dark Shield: Through intense concentration, one can shield themselves from nearly all forms of direct assault from the Dark Side, similar in function to a Sith Amulet
    • Flame Shield: Through intense concentration, one can protect themselves from extreme flame damage, similar to a Sith Amulet
    • Enhancement: Similar to the Legendary Heart of the Guardian, the Crystal slightly boosts the effects of any other crystal installed in the same lightsaber hilt that it is
    • Variety: Through mental command, one can change the nature of the blade generated in a hilt from that of a standard blade, to that of a whip

      • Force Voids: Absolutely will not function in Force Voids
      • Cryo: Suffering direct cryo damage causes the blade of any lightsaber hilt it's in to shut off for a few minutes until the crystal recovers from absorbing the attack
      • Sonic: Sonic bolts bend around any blade generated by the crystal
      • Acid: Immersion in acid would naturally destroy it
      • Neutral Weakness: Neutral Powers are slightly harder to summon the focus to use, and the user suffers more damage from them.
      • Slow: Any blade generated by this crystal is about a tenth slower to swing than normal due to intense gyroscopic forces generated.
      • Radar: Reduces the user's ability to sense incoming blaster bolts, rendering this a specialty item for specific occasions
      • No instant switch: To switch from normal blade function to that of a whip, the user must shut the blade off first, to properly focus their will before turning it back on
      • Impossible to not sense: The Light Side Signature of the weapon cannot be hidden. It will be sensed quite a considerable distance away from the user
      • Influence: The user is forced to contend with the fragmented memories of every past wielder of the Crystal, as each left an imprint. This can manifest in the form of unwanted flashbacks, hallucinations of past users talking to them, questioning their decision making in a way that can be extremely uncomfortable, and the crystal itself attempts to influence the mind of the one who wields it to more merciful ends and may cause an unstable blade that shuts off at random if the user is dead set on a selfish aim. The more the User attempts to go their own way and not the Will of the Force, the more unstable any blade generated becomes. Worst of all, prolonged use of Pyrokinesis when wielding this crystal has a risk of mutating the user's body over time to better generate Pyrokinesis in various unpleasant ways, particularly in rendering the hands charred looking and skeletal (Yet retaining full functionality and strength). This may also reduce their ability to use offensive Neutral Powers even when no longer wielding the blade for a significant number of days afterward.
      • Meditation required: To use it's ability to aid in Force Healing or creating imbued items, one must be stationary, meditating and calm.
      • Conventional: It faces the same level of resistance from conventional and standard lightsaber Resistant materials not enhanced by the Force
      • Breakage: In it's whip form, it's blade is more vulnerable to breakage, even by lightsabers powered by natural crystals.
I could not summarize in a good way without just...making some sort of system that works here. After reading it several times, I changed my mind on a few things but two things is for sure, certain. Anything not striked out, is a talking point.

No, you cannot change it from Blade to Whip form, just...no. A crystal does not work like this, at all. The sickle thing, scimitar? Yeah sure, it makes sense but it is permanently like that. You cannot have a crystal "change its mind" one a lightsaber blade. That is from the lightsaber hilt itself.

No, you cannot have some spider sense helper with all the other stuff it does with very little explanation. Healing, sure it makes a bit of sense. The imbue part? Yeah that is cool and more fluff than useful in a fight. But the weird sense of reduction of use and then instant use is just not working, being not only poorly worded but just not good in general, it borders on precognition. I am requesting it to be removed, it does not need to be there with all of these other powerful effects. You already light people on fire with the flame of the light side, heal better than most in meditation and can touch an object, creating an infinite amount of torches. Just remove this.

Let me know when these two things are changed.
Nathan Bloodscrawl Nathan Bloodscrawl
 
I removed stuff related to whips, sensing, but with the stuff related to the heart of the guardian I was confused, Listib Hibin Listib Hibin .


In the special section it's not crossed out, meaning it's a talking point. Yet in the strength section it is crossed out. Was there a problem with that one? Because going over your review, I couldn't find mention of it in your assessment. Should I remove that ability also?
 
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