FIV Galak Fyyar

[Eugen Aker]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  Intent: To create an effective unique battlecruiser for Zmej Ren.
  
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  Image Source: https://ignusdei.deviantart.com/art/Assimilator-Class-Star-Destroyer-542179745
  
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  Canon Link:
  
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  Primary Source:
  

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

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  Manufacturer: First Order
  
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  Model: N/A
  
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  Affiliation: Asenath Parnell/Zmej Ren
  
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  Production: Unique
  
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  Material: Common Materials
  

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

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  Classification: Unique Battlecruiser
  
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  Length: 3000m
  
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  Width: 700m
  
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  Height: 350m
  
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  Armament: Very High (7900)
  
  100x Anti-Missile Octets(100)
  
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  450x Fast-Mount Ion Cannons (900)
  
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  450x Fast-Mount Shatterbeam Cannons (900)
  
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  200x Flak Guns (200)
  
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  20x Heavy Energy Torpedo Batteries (2,000)
  
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  20x Heavy Long Range Turbolaser Batteries (2,000)
  
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  10x Heavy Tractor Beams (200)
  
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  20x Heavy Warhead Launchers (400)
  
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  40x Hypervelocity Cannons (800)
  
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  200x Quad Laser Cannons (200)
  
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  50x Standard Warhead Launchers (200)
  

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Defenses: Very High

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  Armor/Shielding
  
  Neutronium-Impregnated Ferrocarbon Compartmentalized Frame
  
  Anti-Concussion Field Generators
  

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Matrix Armor

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  Electromagnetic Reactive Armor
  

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Molecular Shielding

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  Redundant Particle/Ray Shielding
  

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Boarding

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  CIC Buried Within Superstructure
  
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  Hatchling Maintenance Droids
  
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  Internal Emplacements
  
  Blaster Repeaters
  
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  Glop Aerosol Dispensers
  
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  Osmotic Field Generators
  
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  Paralysis Beam Emitters
  

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Tudradium Blast Doors w/ Magnetic Seals


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Cyber Security

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  Heavy Lattice-Based Encryption
  
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  Socketguards
  

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Electronic Protection

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  ECM/ECCM Suite (Subspace, Realspace, Sub-Hyperspace, Hyperspace)
  
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  Anti-ordance EM Probes
  
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  Gravitic Amplitude Modulator
  
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  Ion Scrambler
  
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  Reflec Coating
  
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  Thrust Trace Damper
  

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EMP/Ion

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  Cap Drains
  
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  Energy Sinks
  

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Hangar: 5 Squadrons

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  Standard Boarding/Ground Complement
  
  Mixed Corps w/ Equipment (~25,000)
  
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  Boarding Craft/Dropships
  
  Imperial Boarding Pods
  
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  LAAT
  
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  Spiral Assault Ships
  

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Maneuverability Rating: Average

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Speed Rating: Average

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Hyperdrive Class: 1.0

SPECIAL FEATURES

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  Powerplant/Propulsion
  
  Antimatter Furnace
  
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  Ion Engines
  
  Vernier Ion Thrusters
  
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  Thrust Trace Damper (See Above)
  

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Inertial Compensators

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Repulsorlits

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Class 0.5 Military Hyperdrive

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  HIMS
  

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Avionics

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  Navigation
  
  Long-Range Sensor Suite
  
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  Crystal Gravfield Trap
  
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  Precision Navicomputer
  

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Communications

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  Long Range Comm Suite
  
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  Comm Wave Descrambler
  
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  High-Resolution Magnetic Sensors
  
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  Huginn Biocomm Network
  
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  Signal Interceptor
  

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Display/Management

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  Battle Analysis Computer
  
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  Central Control Computer
  
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  Meditation Sphere
  

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Miscellaneous

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  Tractor Beams
  
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  Other standard ship things not explicitly mentioned.
  

Strengths:

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  HIMS enabled hyperdrive.
  
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  Heavily automated systems.
  

Weaknesses:

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  Like with most dagger designs, the Galak Fyyar suffers from having most of its capital placements configured for focused forward fire, making its rear somewhat vulnerable to enemy capital ships with much fewer capital emplacements stern.
  
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  Few starfighter squadrons for a vessel its size. It depends mostly on its large array of point defenses and countermeasures against attack craft.
  

Description:

The FIV Galak Fyyar is the personal flagship of Asenath Parnell, better known as Zmej Ren within the First Order. The Galak Fyyar began life as a prototype and testbed for systems that fell out of the norm for FO warships. After being run through several trials, the prototype battlecruiser would be mothballed, ignored until a hot war broke out with the Galactic Alliance.

With a need for ships that could be quickly fielded for what was expected to be a drawn out total war at the time, the battlecruiser was then pulled out of storage and refurbished for combat duty, though by the time it was ready for deployment, the war had come to an unofficial close.

Once again, the prototype looked to be destined to be mothballed again as there was no need for the exotic design in peacetime, but instead, the ship would be rewarded to Asenath by the Supreme Leader for her heroic exploits and unflinching loyalty. The reward was also a means to get some Ren more comfortable with managing large scale operations, and there was no better vehicle for that than a capital ship.

After being transferred to Asenath’s command, the battlecruiser would receive its official designation and see some modifications to suit the Ren, like a meditation sphere, personal dojo, and a large dungeon.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Class 0.5 Military Hyperdrive

• Hyperdrive Class: (The lower the number, the faster the ship. You may use decimals. [Very Slow: 10 | Average: 2 | Very Fast: 0.3] Going below 1 typically requires balancing out with other weaknesses. Links: Hyperdrive, Hyperdrive Comparisons)

If you can raise your hyperdrive class to 1 or above this can move on to secondary, however you're toeing one line too many with a hyperdrive at that low of a rating. Alternatively you could reduce something else, feel free to ask for suggestions if you would prefer to do so, but this is the easiest change you have available.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Irina Volkov"] Bumped up the rating to 1.0.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Cira"]

 

[Raziel]

[member="Iseult Ren"]

Fine with the stats for a unique Battlcruiser

You still have a reference to a 0.5 hyperdrive
You need to add the stealth features and CGT to strengths
To account for this please drop either armaments or defences to High

 

[Cira]

@Raziel @Iseult Ren

Due to a report, this item is currently under review.

 

[Cira]

[member="Iseult Ren"][member="Iseult Ren"][member="Irina Volkov"][member="Raziel"]

It is to my understanding that the Major Faction is not providing it's approval for a battle cruiser of this size. As it stands, the maximum size a PC may own is 500m. Without the backing of a major faction, you will be unable to give an individual the affiliation or ownership.

Your options are as follows:

Come to a compromise with the First Order in which they will allow you to make this battle cruiser

Or

Change the manufacturer, find another Major faction,, or drop the length and size to suit an individually owned ship. Minor faction ships may be up to 1000m for PCs only, but you will need to find a minor faction that will allow you to use it.

Otherwise, the maximum can only be 500m and balance according to those guidelines

 

[Cira]

[member="Iseult Ren"]

It has been a couple of days. I am going to archive this for now. Please PM me if you have come with a compromise with the First Order staff or if you are just going to make a different ship.

 

[Cira]

Moved to Factory Archives - If you want to remove from the archives, please feel free to tag Raziel, Jamie, or Cira.