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Approved NPC First Wolves

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Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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GENERAL INFORMATION
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Availability: Unique.
  • Deployment: Limited.
  • Strengths & Weaknesses:
  • + Force dead - Due to the experiments to create this group they can't be affected by the force personally. However this doesn't extend to their equipment.
  • + Strength and speed - The experiment doubled the strength and speed of the men and women within the first wolves.
  • + Stealth - The First wolves are a stealth unit that generally specialise in assassinations and black ops missions.
  • - Not air ready - this group is useless against air vehicles or attacks
  • - Vong forming - Due to the high casualty rates during the experimentation done to them, not many of them survived to exist.

  • - Overwhelming numbers - small group, can be overwhelmed by sheer numbers

  • - Open areas at range - not well equipped to deal with open area combat at long range
  • Description: The first wolves are an anti-force user assassination and black ops group. They came about due to experiments run by [member="Jaster of Clan Awaud"] during the helping-loose-the-unwanted thread. Also during this thread Dan Tray took command of the group due to his natural leadership qualities. During the thread Jaster used Vong shaping to make them force dead while also twice as fast and strong.
  • Their training after that consisted of stealth courses as well as CQC and weapons training. Their functions are to act as agents of the Fel Empire killing any force users or political targets that the grand moff or the emperor deem necessary.
 
The Golden Rule
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[member="Dan Tray"]

Hello there,

Dan Tray said:
+ Force dead - Due to the experiments to create this group they can't be affected by the force personally.
This is fine, but I just want to make it clear that effects of this shaping treatment don't extend to any of their equipment.

Dan Tray said:
- Vong forming - due to the experimentation done to them not many of them exist.
What does this mean?

Dan Tray said:
During the thread Jaster used Vong shaping to make them force dead while also twice as fast and strong.
You're going to have to list the enhanced physical performance as a strength.

As it stands now, this submission is a little unbalanced. I'd like to see at least two more significant weaknesses to balances out the strengths you have listed, and that the deployment rate is reduced to limited.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

Fixed so it doesn't extend to equipment.
Fixed it to talk about the high casualty rates of the experimentation mean that not many of them survive it.
Listed that other thing as a strength
Added two weaknesses and dropped them to limited.
 
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