Feedback on Solan Version 2

[Aithne Charr]

Ya, you guys know the process. No need to explain it.

Keep the posts constructive, this is time for me to reflect on how ive been RPing the character and i don't need people coming in to make it about them.

Also, and posting this now. Kaine, you are not to Post here and if you do i will have it removed.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Also, and posting this now. Kaine, you are not to Post here and if you do i will have it removed.

No OOC thread is locked to anyone without them infringing a board rule. A post will only be removed, likewise, if it is breaking rules. Posts are not removed on the command of other members.
Keep this in mind, and keep the conversation civil.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

I consider his posts Harassment at this point and for reasons of OOC and off board reasons

 

[Thane Drexel]

We need to get back to our old ways of starting every thread Solan.


With a drink in our hands.

[member="Solan Charr"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Solan Charr"]
This is not a debate. If a member posts here - any member - and breaks the rules that post will be removed. Not for any other reason.

And now, back to the feedback.

 

[Fen]

Your avatar and sig don't seem to match.

Solan's purpose seems lost in translation. He is a 'Dark' Jedi, but is attempting to do the right thing most of the time. There doesn't seem to be much conflict there, but rather more of a dark side for dark side's sake (and all the force powers included). I might have missed something because usually there's a lot of character development in private threads, and I haven't read them, but from what I have read I'd advise figuring out why he does what he does and emphasizing that conflict between the desire for good and the fact that he has dark urges, rather than accruing titles left and right.

Hope that helped.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Ryan Korr"]

Ya, his being a Dark Jedi but doing good does need a bit more explanation, but i just haven't been given the chance really to explain the causes of why hes so far into the darkside but the Skirmish on Makeb is the root of it.

As for the Avatar and sig... I cant really edit it myself.

 

[Miss Blonde]

I feel like solan Is always trying to be intimidating and edgy, what with the scythe and what not. But he's not really all that intimidating whenever he makes the effort. He's like that movie divergent where it's like watching your little sister try to be sexy for the world but you are just kind of shaking your head.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Patricia Susan Garter"]

Like a puppy i believe your original deduction was. Also, make me a blade with the same properties as the Scythe and i will gladly toss the thing in the trash

 

[Aithne Charr]

Still curious what people think of solan and what areas about him i can expand. I am looking for good things about him and clarification on the bad.